Zebbidy starting to sound like Sands. I guess that's a good thing. Great chapter. I really hope you write a third one. This was great.

The last chapter...what a journey! And I wasn't even there from the beginning! :D

"Good plan. Get in, get out. Never let him know you were here."
That sounds remarkably like Sands, I think Zebbidy has absorbed some of his mannerisms during the course of this adventure.

"...hearing the voice of Lynné Sands would send any sensible person into panic."
Yeah, it gets me every time ;P

"The agent raised an eyebrow, a guillotine’s blade climbing upwards before it’s final, mortal fall."
Oh yeah, I love that image...too perfect!

Lynne is Josey's legal guardian? Heaven help her!

“Where the ** am I?”
Good morning Sands :D

"While all evidence points to suicide, the manner in which she died is…unusual.”
Yeah, I'll say :P

"Doesn’t mean she couldn’t make it with a CIA agent, if you catch my meaning."
Too right...if it's meant to be, it's meant to be ;)

"He wouldn't be able to pick up any more hookers."
The ULTIMATE sacrifice.

Aw! Loved the ending...how is that the most unromantic men in the world can show a tiny hint of vulnerability and suddenly I'm putty in their hands? Zebbidy is a lucky girl ;D

"So I smile and say, when a lovely flame dies,
Smoke gets in your eyes."
You know, that had me tearing up! Beautiful lyrics, really beautiful.

Wonderful ending to a wonderful story, thank you, it's given me so many hours of pleasure :). I will be hoping for a third installment of course, but I'll settle for the PotC story ;) I might have a new fic coming up...maybe ;D.

Thanks again Sidney!

Bravo! Encore!

Big congrats on finishing this epic story. I really like this ending. Count on Lyn to tell everyone Cat's death was a suicide or a murder by someone else. I agree with you, she had to die. This ending was quite...peaceful. A nice wind-down from the chaotic events that happened in the past few chapters. And I LOVE that Lyn adopted Jose. :D *That'll* be interesting.

I really hope that you write another fic. Or at least, do a series of shorter fics. That would be fantastic. I hope you do one about Lyn and Josie.

Best of luck in the future. :) Au revoir!

~morph

Goodness gracious. Lyn as an unofficial guardian? If I do say so myself, that is deliciously absurd :)
I love it. And, out of pure curioustity, did the father ever get that heart attack?

And Sands restricting himself to one woman? Amazing. Very honorable of him, but still...amazing :)

As always, you're great. And I'll follow you to the end. (Or as best I can anyways.)

Oh, and BTW, if it wasn't David, I really don't know who my next guess would be :)
Other than someone who was already in the room.

Hello! That was a good epilogue, and I am glad sands finally figured out that Zebbidy was right for him. Well i do look forward to the next story wether it is long shots or a full story...Bye and good luck!

Great story. I would like to know if he lives or not, but i guess that's all left to the imagination. Thankd God he killed Ajedrez though. And Lynne killed Cat and her 'fiance'. Ah, good times.

hm...One wonder's who this mysterious celebrity could be...Let's think, ey? Now, who do we know thatrresides in Paris? Nice touch. Great story by the way, it's a great follow up from 'The Long Way Home', which I loved as well...wonderful writing and fantastic descriptions...

Yay! Oh Miss Young, how I have missed thee ;)

"Miss…where is your leg?" Poor Josie! She's been through quite a lot, hasn't she?

"Moreau supplied...careful not to let a single speck of blood touch his expensive footwear." Nice image! :P

“‘Stab Fish with pen…Couldn’t come up with something more…effective?” Hahaha! Well, under the circumstances...I didn't see Lynne coming up with any master strokes ;D

"Adrián, her fiancé, was dead, murdered before her own eyes." She cared about him? Blimey, that's a shock.

"...depression could sometimes be so forceful that people would take their own lives just to escape it." And Ajedrez has only just realised this? :P

"“Who’d you think it was, Richie? Van Gaugh?" HAHAHA! :D
Surely that wasn't Cat speaking...

Sands is taking care of Ajedrez...that should be interesting.

"Gosh, I don’t even wanna think about the time you’re gonna serve.” Oh Sands, we all know you don't intend to send Zeb away...right?

"And I love that woman. Damned if I don’t." And damned if you do, I expect.

“No?” Lynné taunted. “Too bad. I do.” *covers ears to protect against the sound of the shot*

"Richard Harrington was dead before he hit the floor." No pain, that's good. He may be a bad guy but you know, I have feelings ;)

*jaw drops* Ok...so I knew she was going to use the poker but that was DISGUSTING! *goes faintly green* Well described...but disgusting.

"Had Sands been a clumsy, unattractive geek Ajedrez would have killed him the second his whipped out his inhaler..." Ok...she better get what's coming to her.

"...she mused and fired two bullets neatly into his chest." WHAT?!

"It was the last thing he saw as the world drained before him and he succumbed to the blackness, cradled in Zebbidy’s arms." O.O But he's alright, right? I mean, you wouldn't let him...no, you wouldn't...would you? *freaks out*

Wonderful end to a wonderful story...such a long one too! Oh good, an epilogue...shall I save the majority of my gushing praise until then? I think so ;) I'll make you wait for a change, eh? ;D

You're not going to write a third story? Well, I can understand that...I'm heart broken of course but I understand :). Looking forward to the epilogue.

Hey!! I am glad that he isn't going to die that would be rather unfortunate, especially since he has survived so much already. I really enjoyed this chapter, and I can't wait for the epilogue. I would enjoy another sequel, but if you can not think of a plot it would be pointless. So may luck be with you and you enjoy writing anything and everything you write from now until the next time I review. Farewell.

Wow.

Fantastic chapter! Loved Jose's line "miss...where is your leg?" Aw! :D Cat finially got what was coming for her. Brillant and grusume. Good job, Lynne! Two thumbs up.

What really made my jaw drop was when Ajedrez shot Sands. Here we are going merrly along in her thoughts and musings. And then pow-pow... And Sands has two more holes to add to his collection. Ah, but before he goes, he can at least relish that at long last, the ** is dead. :) Amazing writing. This ending almost reminds me of the end of OUaTiM.

I can't wait for the epilogue! It's a bit sad that this epic fic is just about over. I hope that you do do a third installment of some sort. I'll understand if you dont...but please do anyways! :D

David eh? Well, I suppose I was kinda close. I do love his reasonings though. If you can't beat em, join em right? Right on.

And Lyn's destruction of Cat, that was so great! Just slowy tearing her down, my goodness, I love it.

And of course, finally, Sands gets to kill the ** once and for all! It's a good day in the world. Thanks goodness he isn't gonna die though, I was quite scared, almost to the point of tears I must say, that you were gonna kill him off.

Great job, you're brilliant as always. And I too love the new looney side of Tom Cruise :)

OK I just read chapter 50. This story is the best I have ever read on here. I's amazing. And this chapter was really funny:

“Answer the door.”

“Then shake hands with whoever’s there, then roll over,”

“Then fetch Ajedrez her slippers –”

“You forgot ‘play dead,’”

That was just priceless. I cannot express how much i love your story.

Well jeezome. How many chapters do you plan on having? I on 23 right now and I'm trying to catch up to your 50. i have a feeling this is gonna take a long time.

Anyway. I just wanted to say that so far this is a great story. You keep all the characters in character, even the one's you made up. And I love it when you talk to the characters in the a/ns. This is a fun story to read and I'm gonna go read a few more chapters now.

you're an absolutely amazing writer, and this is and amazing story that needs to be updated!

Sorry bout not actually login in my comp isn't letting me. Well anyways, I have realized that also, most of them are very close to mary-sues and i can't stand those. Well i am glad that it is half way done. Well i can't wait bye and good luck