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Reviews for: The Bottle
epalladino
2006-03-22 . chapter 1
Very romantic. Thank you, Beth Palladino
Terry L. Gardner
2006-01-17 . chapter 1
This story is so touching, so tender, so moving.
GratefullyDead
2005-03-13 . chapter 1
Oh yah, no doubts here that Capt. Gregg and Carolyn Muir were fated to meet each other.
A lovely story, really.
mrsscatz
2005-01-29 . chapter 1
sweet story. Proving that they were soul mates though born years apart.
Anabelle Lael
2004-09-13 . chapter 1
How romantic to find a message of love through the years.I loved when the Captain said at the end that the message had arrived to whom it was sent. Just beautiful.
ANOTHERGAMMFAN
2004-07-08 . chapter 1
Nice story. Very sweet and heartwarming. You have caught the flavor of the show very well. I only have one slight problem with it. You really should invest in a good spellcheck/grammar check system, or perhaps take on the services of a beta reader.

There are several mis-spellings / missing words / wrong words for what I think you meant to write in several places in the story, which are rather distracting. Too for to -- alluded for eluded, for example. Other than that, I like it very much and hope you continue writing!
Karmyn
2004-07-06 . chapter 1
Lovely, very touching story. I very much enjoyed reading this. Very realistic. I can see the characters acting this way. Very romantic. I do hope you plan to write more.
trueGAMMfan
2004-07-05 . chapter 1
Lovely story! Sweetly romantic. Hope to see more of your work posted soon.
CottageGhost
2004-07-04 . chapter 1
This was really sweet! I like the idea that Carolyn has been haunting Daniel's dreams since before they even met -- very nice! I also really enjoyed the scene on the ship at night, with Daniel making his rounds, as any good captain most likely does. The scene with the ship's cat was a nice touch, also :-) And the ending was as it should be -- destiny works in mysterious ways, after all. Very nice read, indeed -- thanks for sharing!

Chantal
RevSue
2004-07-03 . chapter 1
Thanks for another EXCELLENT GAMM story!! Please keep writing them! (We'll have you hooked yet! LOL)
Susan
Anne
2004-07-03 . chapter 1
Just beautiful your story. Very sweet. Thanks for a another great read.
lovecelest
2004-07-03 . chapter 1
This story is sweet, but a little sticky. I mean what are the chances of the bottle actually coming up on shore by Gull Cottage. However, I do like the ment for each other for all eternity angle.
jtbwriter
2004-07-03 . chapter 1
I like this story-very romantic and sweet.

The fact that the Captain first gets angry then realizes that his message from long ago has found it's inspiration works so well.

I like to think that like the actors who portrayed them, the Captain and Carolyn are together for all time.

Thanks!
Mary
2004-07-02 . chapter 1
Very sweet story. I love the "Message in a Bottle" angle! These two souls were simply destined to find each other!

Thanks for sharing this with us!
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