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| epalladino 2006-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseVery romantic. Thank you, Beth Palladino |
| Terry L. Gardner 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis story is so touching, so tender, so moving. |
| GratefullyDead 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseOh yah, no doubts here that Capt. Gregg and Carolyn Muir were fated to meet each other. A lovely story, really. |
| mrsscatz 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abusesweet story. Proving that they were soul mates though born years apart. |
| Anabelle Lael 2004-09-13 ch 1, | abuseHow romantic to find a message of love through the years.I loved when the Captain said at the end that the message had arrived to whom it was sent. Just beautiful. |
| ANOTHERGAMMFAN 2004-07-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice story. Very sweet and heartwarming. You have caught the flavor of the show very well. I only have one slight problem with it. You really should invest in a good spellcheck/grammar check system, or perhaps take on the services of a beta reader. There are several mis-spellings / missing words / wrong words for what I think you meant to write in several places in the story, which are rather distracting. Too for to -- alluded for eluded, for example. Other than that, I like it very much and hope you continue writing! |
| Karmyn 2004-07-06 ch 1, | abuseLovely, very touching story. I very much enjoyed reading this. Very realistic. I can see the characters acting this way. Very romantic. I do hope you plan to write more. |
| trueGAMMfan 2004-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely story! Sweetly romantic. Hope to see more of your work posted soon. |
| CottageGhost 2004-07-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was really sweet! I like the idea that Carolyn has been haunting Daniel's dreams since before they even met -- very nice! I also really enjoyed the scene on the ship at night, with Daniel making his rounds, as any good captain most likely does. The scene with the ship's cat was a nice touch, also :-) And the ending was as it should be -- destiny works in mysterious ways, after all. Very nice read, indeed -- thanks for sharing! Chantal |
| RevSue 2004-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThanks for another EXCELLENT GAMM story!! Please keep writing them! (We'll have you hooked yet! LOL) Susan |
| Anne 2004-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust beautiful your story. Very sweet. Thanks for a another great read. |
| lovecelest 2004-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThis story is sweet, but a little sticky. I mean what are the chances of the bottle actually coming up on shore by Gull Cottage. However, I do like the ment for each other for all eternity angle. |
| jtbwriter 2004-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this story-very romantic and sweet. The fact that the Captain first gets angry then realizes that his message from long ago has found it's inspiration works so well. I like to think that like the actors who portrayed them, the Captain and Carolyn are together for all time. Thanks! |
| Mary 2004-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery sweet story. I love the "Message in a Bottle" angle! These two souls were simply destined to find each other! Thanks for sharing this with us! |