hi..nice fic, even tho i am not a fan of D&G fics heh. there is ONE storyline u might want to keep in mind tho, since u hate Greg..lol...how bout one where D leaves G for that hunk Charlie? i think they would have been much better off trust me. hehe

The story was out of order and not compleated, but a good try

Well. I like these chapters better, than the first one. Mostly because something actually happens. ;-)
It sounds interesting and I want you to write more! Please.

Uhm ... sorry, but - review? Review what? You haven´t exactly written anything so far, those few sentences look more like a summary to me. But, well, for a prologue, it´s enough, I guess.
But you could start and write another chapter. I´d certainly read it because - even though you haven´t written much - I would like to know what kind of accidents threatens their marriage...

CLIFFHANGER!

more would be good.

I totaly agree with your views, and i like the fact that you put them clearly and without nastyness, liking the idea so far, can't wait to read more.
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motherkat
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