it seems to me like Gaara's that one piece of puzzle that just refuses to fit.

Aww...now *I* feel like crying...

Three things:

a. I'm a dithering mess

b. I'm old fashioned

c. and I'm trying not to offer a kidney for the next chap LOL

b. I don't know. Naruto turning to Gaara to that extent for comfort doesn't speak of love/romance - the kind he believed he held for Sasuke though I understand it in terms of the violation he received from Itachi. It was better that he not lose it to Itachi ne? Though that might've been a better contrast to Ino?

Yes totally agree - Gaara needed to hear it. Guessing the blond was Ino - was leaves me quirky on the fact that since her Sasuke hasn't been involved with another girl. Could it be his first love was his true love? Arrgghh that's me be all old doddy... can't wait for the next chaps to weigh those experiences.

Quite frankly it's a mess and I can't wait to see how you piece it all together - btw Naruto's drawing of himself, simplistic, cliche but dang it was perfect. :)

O.O!!
my gawd my eyes almost popped out with reading this!!
its really good! as in really really really genius good!! and your right ITACHI is fricking hot *drools* if i didnt knew any better i'd say please marry me, but i guess that wont do XD

And now he felt himself spinning around, because Naruto had a hold of both of his hands and was spinning him around in the rain. All Sasuke could see was Naruto's face, because when he tried to look anywhere else the world seemed to move very fast, too fast to keep up with.

I happen to find that metaphor for love the best of all, it leaves me nigh speechless

Ack! I was hoping I wouldn't have to comment every chap :)

Gaara is the perfect catalyst in this situation. Sasuke needs to suffer a bit methinks ;)

Zabuza and Haku - oh for awesome additions! Love it

Also big LAUGHS regarding Naruto's journal entries, he comes off younger and a lot more naieve. Likewise the replies he receives are carefree with a shot or two of depth.

Dang it! Really dang it! I'm liking this the more I read sniff!

Do you mean to tell me you write SasuNaru and don't actually read/watch manga/anime? WHOA! Mind you I'm drifting off it too with its preposterous sidestories and SasuNaru being swept under the rug lol...

Anyway Sasuke is one bleeping TEME in this! As for Sakura huh! In perfect characterisation for me :) EWW I can't believe he tried that on Naruto with her claws and ;alksjdfajsdflj still all over him - KJASDFJASJ :)

Dang it! I realise this is incomplete and probably would stay so, thus I read at my peril :) but arrgghh I usually find your stories pull me in regardless...so I shall soldier on.

This is diff though. Not read a depressing Naruto so far but his adamancy, determination is all purely Naruto...of course having been directed here by a query...I'm already fretting knowing that Sasuke gets it on with the pink banshee arrggh whom I already loathe in this.

A songfic huh? Shucks there is a strange quality to your writing, it's brash. Like the clunk of heavy metal that conceals the sweetness of its tone...

ahh :)

i love it! i hope you will update soon since you haven't updated for ages!

Isn't it interesting to find reviews for a story that hasn't been updated for what? *checks date* 4 years? The last update from you on any of you stories was in 2007, right? 2 years isn't long enough I guess. So yeah, I'll keep this story on my list of things that will might update, it'll be off by 2012... So yeah, you prolly won't, but I hope you get a chapter up. Maybe one that ends it all, whatever you want. Or just declare you quit on it, either one!

This story sounds really good. Naruto reminds me of me here. He likes all the same things I do and acts like me too so far.

I love Naruto's whiskers too. I don't know why anyone would treat poor Naruto like an outcast. I would be his friend and then we'd be outcasts together.

aww this is so cute and please upload as soon as you can!! thanks!

BRAVO. JUST. WOW.

:D This TOTALLY made my day.

*throws tons of cookies*

I love your descriptive ways of describing things.

You rock. :D

omg WOW. Reading this one..some...other place...can't remember where. The place with the picture of naruto at the top? way to be vague.. I know. Anyway, yeah LOVE It. Totally the best naruto goes to college fanfic since roommates. Could be better if it was finished...Love all the characters, Naruto, Sasuke, Gaara, Haku, Itachi (yeah, even him) I adored the kiss in the rain (who wouldn't) and Naruto trying to find clothes from Gaara's wardrobe and Haku and Zabuza (so canon) Anyway, hope you update!

I think I'm addicted to your work. Anyways, I can't find the link to the actually chapters and not the teasers.
Could you send me the link?