unexpected but interesting ending. Cool story, I enjoyed reading about their one on one conversations in the last few chapters.

Very cute little story! i liked it alot, and i read it beginning to end, addicting it is! great job!!

cliche. If you had paid more attention to detail, it would have gone slower, or you shouldn't have ended it there. It was too fast...overall it was okay though.

Honestly, really cliche.

way to fast.

he didnt even know anything about the girl. he just danced with her. and asked her if she liked quiddich. then suddenly he's madly in love?!? no way. seriously.

i like your writing, and word choice. just slow it down. would malfoy give up everything he knows after dancing with a pretty girl?

great story

love the story!love love love love. =P

Aww! I really, really, REALLY liked this story!! It is soo good!! This story reminds me of "A Cinderella Story" with Hilary Duff and Chad Michael Murray... minus all the magic of course!

soo good!

thought is was great am im going to go read ur other storys now!

I loved it. I was so cute and sweet!

luvit write more asap

wow that was awesome! im so gonna read ur other stories!! add me to msn if u have it
i_hate_hippies145@hotmail.com

lol i know my email is really messed but i was just in a hippie hating mood the day i picked it. ;)

if there is going to be any more chapters can you please send them to me at Yamikeckley@hotmail.com i don't get on much.

the chapters are vr short n lacks content so the story is r rushed...yeah...