 blklover 2009-11-29 . chapter 21great story please keep up the good work I can't wait to find out what happen next please update soon as soon as possible please |
 old-crow 2009-09-28 . chapter 4Hi,
You have a logic disconnect between the sequel and the original story. If you are still active and writing stories, the easiest thing to do would be to edit and repost a couple of the chapters from the Council story to make the storyline fit.
O-C |
 XxEternal ButterflyxX 2009-08-16 . chapter 21OMG *tears* that was the best story i have every read i want you to continue but i am a bit like no yoo shouldnt as it would spoil the magic but another story might just make the magic grow so what to do?? just DONT DO A JKR and ruin it by stupid plotholes and gaps that dont add up and stuff but anywayz lovley story it really is amazing both this and the prequel i love them both thanks for the wonderfully reads :D |
 supergirl3684 2009-07-03 . chapter 21that was so...amazing!! Harry lost his magic...That about made me cry! :D |
 supergirl3684 2009-07-02 . chapter 1That was great! :D I'm so happy there's a sequel! (A completed sequel at that!) |
 Ginnylove9990 2009-05-01 . chapter 21Another awesome story. I loved every word of it. This is as good as your first one. Please keep up the great work. |
 Ginnylove9990 2009-04-29 . chapter 1Ok I am hooked again. Lookes like this is going to be another awesome story. Will try to review chapter. But if I don't don't worry. It just means I like it to much to give a review. |
 noylj 2009-03-28 . chapter 7Will anyone ever notice how bad most of Bumble's ideas are? |
 noylj 2009-03-28 . chapter 2You know, I hate it when the dead bad guy we saw killed comes back. If we have to have a bad guy, make it Bumble-the-Sith or someone new.
Good story anyway. |
 Lor 2009-02-10 . chapter 21 Uh...forgive me if I am mistaken but if Harry dispersed his magic how did he live for over 115 years? |
 Annamia 2009-01-03 . chapter 21i have to say, i really liked the whole bit with harry losing his magic. it seems to fit somehow, and it just wouldn't have been fair to kill him. he's been through so much; he deserves time to be himself. and he'll never be able to be himself with his magic. everyone will depend on him to save them again and again and again, and the only way he'll have any peace is if he's not physically capable of saving them. you managed that brilliantly.
that said, i though the whole end, the last little passage about what happened next, was a bit much. it was informative, yes, but you could have left it off right as draco and mione are getting married and the story would have been just as effective. -shrugs-
anyway, these were two very good stories, and i'm delighted that i managed to find them. thanks for writing and posting them!
--kyra |
 NobbyPotter 2008-12-28 . chapter 3Delphie Lardoir is an acronym for Ophelia Riddle. (there's an extra r though) How come Rose didn't see it? ARGH! |
 David Fishwick 2008-09-29 . chapter 21Cool idea and I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for writing. |
 duskglow 2008-09-27 . chapter 21Good story, except that if I'm mistaken a few people came back to life for no apparent reason. And I don't know if I'm confused, but I think Remus was *already* cured? Yeah, in chapter 21 of the previous story. But in the last chapter you said that Dumbledore helped with a cure for Lycanthropy.
Yeah, and moody was killed in chapter 7 but came back in a later chapter:
"‘How on earth did he do that?’ Moody hissed. Draco raised his staff again and met the green eyes watching him. Green eyes that were shining with more pride and affection then he had ever seen before. A grey eye widened as Harry threw his staff to the side once more." |
 tar heels superstar 2008-08-21 . chapter 21great chapter and the ending did seem to be fit and how did the elves take it that their king had no magic because that should be interesting so update soon and keep writing. can't wait to read more of your fics. |