And again, this was good as well. I always thought that the Dream Sequence/Time Travel bit was particularly inspired and well done. Ah well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Wow.. can't wait to see what you have in store for them in the next story!

Wispr

And their relationship grows, so very nicely done. Also like the infiltration program.

Wispr

Good chapter and I'm glad to see things ending on a good note between Tom and B'Elanna.

Wispr

Again the building relationship is so very realistic and I love the humor you mix into your story. Very well balanced.

Wispr

I like how you are writing the growing friendship between Seven and B'Elanna. Coming across as very emotionally real.

Wispr

That was a heartwarming chapter, really like the new Seven.

Wispr

Really interesting story line you got here. I like how they are interpreting Seven's tail.


Wispr

Oh wow this is bloody cool! You did a bloody fantastic job in describing the battle. The words flowed smoothly and made for a vivid reading.

Wispr

Really like how you are introducing the Klingon elements into your story, plus B'Elanna's reaction was priceless!

Wispr

The interaction between B'Elanna and Seven made for an interesting read... good work!

Wispr

now im really intrigue about her tasks...

Poor Harry, nice guy. but sadly, oh well. i enjoy reading how guys get shoot down anyway :)

dream..? nah..probably not, at least not in the real sense of a dream

ah..i think im seeing some use for the colouring...at least i think so..