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RL Seward
2009-11-11 . chapter 71
Did you make up the Dark Mimbari or am I forgetting an episode?
crossover-dude
2009-11-10 . chapter 71
I was very pleased to see that this story was updated, but I wonder why SpaceBattles did not get the update.
JovianJeff
2009-11-10 . chapter 71
Magnificent! A very good Minbari centric chapter that showed they could put aside their pride for the greater good. These are Minbari who care about their people. It was also quite chilling, and yet wondrous to see Vorlon and Shadow working together. One could say desperate times, desperate measures, or adversity really does pull different people together. Thank you for this great chapter!
BenRG
2009-11-10 . chapter 71
Ah! So, at last, Kosh's backup plan has been revealed. The ultimate shape of this plan is still unknown, of course. The Vorlons are never that easy to read. Will the ultimate end be revenge or redemption? Are the Minibari to one day be the spearhead of a counter-strike, or is Kosh's co-operation with the Shadows indication that the two warring First Ones wish to make amends for their actions by giving their pawns back their futures? Much remains to be seen.

Something tells me that any hopes of a ceasefire and peaceful resolution won't last long. The kid in charge of that Sharlin strikes me as the sort who would rather die than suffer even the appearance of defeat. Worse still, he would prefer that /everyone/ die rather than he suffer that indignity. People like that trigger genocides.

Well, I think we are finally coming to the climax! Looking forward to more!

BenRG's Rating: 8/10
Louie Pastiche
2009-11-09 . chapter 71
Just..plain...WHOA!
Wonderbee31
2009-11-09 . chapter 71
Well, it looks like the tides might change if things go this way, and will be curious as to how much this will continue on, as the Minbari warriors are willing to let everyone die for their principles, and their enemis on the other side are looking willing to push it to the point that the Minbari cannot make war.
Jerry Unipeg
2009-11-08 . chapter 71
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Looks like some of the the old ones did learn some thing from the war.
Roosterman71
2009-11-08 . chapter 71
Great to see this one updated. I like the idea of the Vorlon and Shadows uniting against the Federation.
The Sithspawn
2009-11-08 . chapter 71
Good chapter!

Dark Minbari meet Light Minbari?
You know I get the feeling that people have gone crazy using Dark and Light monikers. Of course that could just be me, been reading too many Marvel Comics, they have a whole 'Dark' Reign arc that they're writing, with Dark getting attached to whole variety of titles e.g. Dark Wolverine, Dark X-men, Dark Avengers...

Anyway,keep up the good work, hope to see more soon please! Though maybe not before Another Perspective, that really needs to get developed furthur.
phoebe turner
2009-11-08 . chapter 71
great chapter!
TygerC
2009-11-08 . chapter 71
Excellent chapter.
Firewolfe
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
Exelleng chapter. I am so glad to see this story updated. It is one of the nicest pieces out there. Thanks again for taking the time to write it. I look forward to more when RL allows.

Lisa
James Axelrad
2009-11-07 . chapter 71
great stuff. bit on the short side, but oh well. it has some very interesting bits of foreshadowing though. looking forward to the next chapter.
baz
2009-10-17 . chapter 70
brilliant cant wait for the next chapter
RL Seward
2009-10-15 . chapter 67
I liked the references to planetary militaries of the Federation.
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