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Wonderbee31
2009-11-09 . chapter 71
Well, it looks like the tides might change if things go this way, and will be curious as to how much this will continue on, as the Minbari warriors are willing to let everyone die for their principles, and their enemis on the other side are looking willing to push it to the point that the Minbari cannot make war.
Jerry Unipeg
2009-11-08 . chapter 71
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Looks like some of the the old ones did learn some thing from the war.
Roosterman71
2009-11-08 . chapter 71
Great to see this one updated. I like the idea of the Vorlon and Shadows uniting against the Federation.
The Sithspawn
2009-11-08 . chapter 71
Good chapter!

Dark Minbari meet Light Minbari?
You know I get the feeling that people have gone crazy using Dark and Light monikers. Of course that could just be me, been reading too many Marvel Comics, they have a whole 'Dark' Reign arc that they're writing, with Dark getting attached to whole variety of titles e.g. Dark Wolverine, Dark X-men, Dark Avengers...

Anyway,keep up the good work, hope to see more soon please! Though maybe not before Another Perspective, that really needs to get developed furthur.
phoebe turner
2009-11-08 . chapter 71
great chapter!
TygerC
2009-11-08 . chapter 71
Excellent chapter.
Firewolfe
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
Exelleng chapter. I am so glad to see this story updated. It is one of the nicest pieces out there. Thanks again for taking the time to write it. I look forward to more when RL allows.

Lisa
James Axelrad
2009-11-07 . chapter 71
great stuff. bit on the short side, but oh well. it has some very interesting bits of foreshadowing though. looking forward to the next chapter.
baz
2009-10-17 . chapter 70
brilliant cant wait for the next chapter
RL Seward
2009-10-15 . chapter 67
I liked the references to planetary militaries of the Federation.
RL Seward
2009-10-12 . chapter 55
Kim looked at his commanding officer, steeped in moral agony. He was a Federation citizen, but first and foremost he was of Japanese descendent and one who knew much of the history of his country, even if he himself was several generations removed from the land of the Rising Sun. “I…” >Kim is a Korean name
RL Seward
2009-10-11 . chapter 51
Any chance the folks over at Spacebattles might make a video of one of your battle scenes? That would be cool.
RL Seward
2009-10-10 . chapter 40
I have thought for a long time that the ST people should have developed the Nimbus 3 storyline as the only port of entry into the Romulan Empire. Nimbus could be populated by peoples from theconquered worlds of the Romulans and Klingons and various dissident groups from all three superpowers and various other races. Just a thought.
RL Seward
2009-10-10 . chapter 39
“Different races in association with one another are in an either dominant or subservient role, making a centralized government possible.

Lot of truth in that/
RL Seward
2009-10-08 . chapter 22
I know that this story is mostly finished, but with the use of Fed Ex ships, I was thinking that you might do a mention something. In TNG episode, Best of Both Worlds, we saw Earth Defense Force warships. We have seen Vulcan and Andorian Defense vessels. Maybe that might fit future plans you have. Just a thought.
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