another good dark one.

I can relate to BB. In more ways than one. Well written. I liked it, and I'm not a poem person.

I loved this.
I love the visual you give with your words.
You've got serious talent.
Keep writting,I can't wait to read more.
~Kill me-Kiss me

*cries* this...was...so...BEAUTIFUL! and sad! but i liked it a lott! these poems are so awesome!

very nice, and well thought out, you do love almost as well as you do death!

aw!! that's so sad!!
you never cease to amaze me.
xoxo.

this should be a fic. like they are in a final battle with slade, and they are in trouble, and beast boy sacrifices himself because he feels he has nothing to lose. i just had an image in my head as beast boy standing on a dliff about ready to take slade with him into a boiling thing of lava. O.o woah... did i just think of all that?

oh no. poor BB. The feeling of rejection by the one we love most must be horrable.

Even more amazing then the last!
I love the ending, it brings anger to the angst in a wonderful way :)
~RM~

Flying Star,
It's really good. I don't really like BB-Rae stuff, but this is an exception. I just don't really get how you can rhyme every two lines. I can only rhyme every other line as you've probably seen when/if you/you've read/read my poems. Sorry about the confusing /'s. KW! (Keep Writing!)

~BlackSword6

Will you ever cease to amaze me? And I am a member now! But I don't have any stories but they're in my head. So my e-mail is moon0514@aol.com, just incase it isn't there. Once again, you're an amazing writer!

Fantastic! That is exactly how something like this would work. I mean, if the BB/Rae romance couldn't work out, it would be because of this. I love the last two lines! Implications of suicide...
btw, thank you very much for reviewing 'Remnants' so often! I always look forward to hearing from you. I'm also curious--I sent you an email a little while ago, did you ever get it? I never got a response, so I thought maybe I got the email address wrong... Sorry!!
--Amber

Haha, Raven/BB didn't work out...Sorry about that, not one of my favorite couplings... Anyway...The poem. Deep, darker emotions...I like. ^_^ And sorry about not reveiwing anything in a while...

Aw...sad but good. Again, I enjoyed how though the poem had it's own little rhythmn, the rhyming didn't get in the way, but instead, made it flow better. Poor BeastBoy...I'm surprised that he could be so angsty though lol

s'pretty good! sad and pretty good.
nice job.