This story was very funny.I loved how Jackal and Hyena acted,they made the story funnier.

Excuse me... i juts have to recover from how much I laughed dring this...

My gosh, I couldn't stop laughing. I'm going to have to check to see if you haven't done another one like this.

O. My. Gawd. THATS THE FUNNIEST THING IVE EVER READ! Cant...stop...laughing...I luved it! Keep on writin! _

Absolutely HILARIOUS! I loved it! So well thought out, so perfect...! You even bothered to track down the songs and change them... I'm guessing you had a lot free time when you wrote it...