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Ryuus2 1/20/09 . chapter 12
I checked your author page and it says that you might be updating some of your older fics in the near future. Is this one of them? I hope it is because I really want to see how the story plays out with the characters and I'm incredibly curious about Lilly and Terra and can't wait until their roles are revealed. And I have never seen anyone have Ranma sweet-talk Kodachi into giving him up. That was an award winning idea and I hope that more like it are soon coming from you.
zanthian123 11/21/08 . chapter 11
i have already reviewed for ch.12 so am reviewing for this chapter and would like to say that this story has not been updated for quite a while and would love to read more of the story and also i want to know what happens next!
Fice 6/27/08 . chapter 12
please hurry up and finish the chapter and post more some of the work has to be finished by now
anon 1/22/07 . chapter 1
Yo, I'm just here to offer you some sympathy. I didn't really read your story(I'm sorry if you're mad at that.), but I thought it would be kind of awkward to contact you through your profile. I've never really contacted anyone through their profile anyways.

So, you don't have to answer back to this, 'kay? I just want to give you the best of luck.

I hope that the rest of your life will be good. I know this message is very short and vague, but I really hope you have the best from now on.

I hope you'll feel better soon, seriously.

Just goes to show you how a stranger can care.
zanthian123 6/6/06 . chapter 12
hurry and post i want to know what happens please update
Adeptis 1/30/06 . chapter 12
Great story. Can't wait to see what Nodaka's house looks like
Virosa 10/8/05 . chapter 12
Can u update some time soon is been over two years for gods sake UPDATE!
griffenvamp 4/13/05 . chapter 12
a little too ast of a story and too many charitos

other wise i got to say one hell of a good idea and please get the next chapter out as soon as possibles.
Dark Topaz 1/10/05 . chapter 12
It has been most a year what happened
fury 1/1/05 . chapter 1
congrats on your baby girl

good luck on the child support, the job, and everything else

you are a wonderful writer dear one truely worth waiting for

i do hope you will continue writing one day but until then rest assure you will have fans waiting when/if you return

luck in all things

good bye
Dragon Dagger 10/18/04 . chapter 12
will you be continuing this? Its been well over a year since I've seen an update to this.

Please let me know if you have more chapters on another site.

Thanks

Dragon Dagger
Rain Urameshi 4/9/04 . chapter 13
damn! this is a good fic! it's nice to see ppl who think akane is the bitch she is besides me. i hope you get the next chapter up soon. get it up as soon as it is possible for you, k? i'm in no hurry to read
darkrhapsody007 7/25/03 . chapter 13
Man! That's gotta suck. I've got a new computer but it's completely shitty. No upgrades and somebody is tracking me ARGH!

Anyway, you're fics are good. Anonoyms was right though. You're pairings suck balls (with an exception of few, no offense or anything)

Trowa and Setsuna? What the hell is up with that? Better Ranma and Setsuna.

You know what? You're mixing up the Japanese names with the dubbed versions. Serena/Usagi Tsukino, Lita/Makoto Kino, Mina/Minako Aino, Darien/Mamoru Chiba, Amara/Haruka Tenou, Michelle/Michiru (forgot), Setsuna/Trista Meiouh. (I've heard, not too sure about Setsuna/Trista.) Then there's Rei Hino, Ami Mizuno, and Hotaru Tomoe

I like the flashback stuff. it's cool, but I keep thinking about the knights' outfits are like Tuxedo Mask's/Tuxedo Kamen's. Sorry bout the slashes but i need to seperate English from Japanese (english first, japanese second).

Aside from those minor details, this is SO Awesome!
Materia-Blade 6/3/03 . chapter 3
9/10. This is a great fic, but you have to admit there are a lot of coincidents in it. Ranma knowing Haruka while Ryoga knows Michuru from about the same time in there lives? It's possible I suppose. One thing, and you may have gotten this in another review allready; the Moko Takabisha was Ranma's own personall technique. He made it using the layout of the Shi Shi Hokodan(Ryoga's technique) No one but Ranma knows it. And just a ball of ki wouldn't describe it. There is also the Shi Shi Hokodan and the Happo Fire Burst.(Believe it or not those bombs are made of Ki) It's allright, though. Not that big a deal. Like I said earlier, up to ch.3 this fic rates 9/10. Great fic.
Dragon Dagger 4/8/03 . chapter 13
Hon, RL comes first. Get yourself pulled together, find a new place to live, get settled and then when your Muses come back in to settle in start writing again.

I have been in your position many times unfortunately. the good part is that I have survived all of them and I am still writing (even if I haven't posted a new story in ages)

Just be certain to keep us updated on your progress and I'm certain that we'll all understand.
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