Oh, this almost seems like what happened on my game. Even though I'm a girl, I play Harvest Moon, and I made Daniel (Jack) marry Muffy first, and I realized she was kind of boring. I actually ended up messing up that game and I had to delete it. On my new game I married Nami, who was a lot more interesting, and my son is so nice and quiet instead of a hyper little monkey. x3 This is going GREAT, please keep writing.

Oh, wow. This is going on my favorites too. You're really good at writing!

Wow, I really like this story... it fits the story line yet is different... please update!

This is a good story! I think it has potential for some pretty good drama. Longer chapters! Keep it up!

Sounds like the beginning of domestic problems. And hey, I just noticed this is your first fic! It's pretty good for your first story.

Woah, that's the kind of premise I don't see in HM fics. Keep going, this sounds interesting and a potential tear-jerker.

Very interesting plot. Keep up!