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loved it
heart tweaty

hi! i liked your story but i found a few loop holes in it while reading.

(1) Kagome's mom could not have been 28 when Kagome is 18 (or even close to being 18). this would mean that Kagome's mother had her when she was 10...

(2) Inuyasha should not have transformed since he had the tetsuaiga. It would have worked if you mentioned something along the lines of the tetsuaiga not even being able to withstand the power because inuyasha was so sad.

either way i liked the plot but try to remember this kinda thing in your next story

[crying] that was so beautiful i loved it kags + inu 4ever + 4always!

well that was interesting. very good kinda sad. but well done.

This is so sad! It is very well written though. Good job! Keep writing!

dude is that it!no!lol but that was good, i like the sad ones i wrote a few myself but i yet have to post them and get an account on , but plz reply

YOU NEED A WAY BETTER CAUSE OF DEATH!

sweet

O_O. That was really good. Sad but good. I loved it. Also, a little while ago (probably about a month) you had a story up called Whisper. What happened to it? I liked it. I didn't get a chance to finish reading it but it was good. Anywho... I really liked this. Keep up the good work.

this was so sad!! you should continue if possible like make inu yasha change his mid and fid the rest of the shards

OO Yes, I hate you...not in a bad way. It's just that you freaking KILLED Inuyasha AND Kagome! Darn...oh well! Doesn't matter! Cause I killed Inu in one of my fics!

-PatrioticPuppy

is this a one shot? or are you going to do more cuz this is one of the best fics i have read in a long time!
tessie