At first, I was a little worried that Rin was into the heavy stuff. Okay, so I was a LOT worried. But then the stuff in the saran wrap threw me; what kind of drug do you eat? At least I was now certain that she wasn't a junkie. To be honest, after she wolfed down the food, I thought she was addicted to sugar. Keep up the good work.

and there i was thinking she was on drugs! you have fantastic powers of manipulation! :D

~ abyssgirl

This story was such a red herring.

The bad grades/attendance, the loss of weight, the "friends" who make her life hell but she stays with them for no reason, and finally the muscle contractions! I seriously thought she was doing coke or something!

But thank GOD it's only soccer. I would not forgive you for putting Rin on drugs.

You. Are. Evil.
Making us think Rin was on drugs, but instead playing soccer. Now that's a red herring! Will give coherent review when brain comes back from fanfic heaven.

...deception, huh? You must be a fantastic liar; good writers tend to be. I seriously thought she was doing drugs or something, and I was freaking out. Yeesh; I should've seen it coming!

A theme in your stories...Sess and Kagura always have, like, fifty kids! Those two must have a ton of energy.

baha that was great. One thing I don't understand though. Why would the dogs go crazy from the smell? Unless they were second hand... then they'd smell, and what did she pop in her mouth? Energy pill things? Bah, anyways, it was very good. Onto the rest of your stuff!!
Nova

*falls off chair*

She was playing SOCCER?!

Very good though, making it look like our poor Rin-chan was taking some nasty drugs.

So Naraku's Angels II isn't up anymore?

*le sob*

You BETTER finish up Letters soon and repost it!

You don't have to if you have a good reason though ^__^

~Unknown Fool~

Phew! I'm glad it wasn't what you led me to believe XP

:falls over from a huge heartattack:...you nearly killed me! you evil evil person who is excellent at writting suspense stories! It was really good, and it doesnt need anything else. Thank you

Wow...that was a really good story! I liked it a lot! Is there gonna be more or is that it?
Never stop writing!
Suaru

You update far too fast for me to keep up with you. But I'll try to do it. Because your stories make me smile so much.
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Ok, so of course, I thought she was doing drugs at first. But you have such a way of twisting things when you're being ambiguous. . . I knew there was something else. And I loved it! Very good little story there. It brought a smile on my face, and I've been having a bad day, so Thanks! Thank you thank you thanks!
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I thought Rin was doing drugs too... XD

Great story

OMG! I LOVE IT! oo;
I was all scared and anxious 'cause Rin seemed to be taking drugs, and I was thinking, "I mean, what else could it be? Candy? Pshht." Hehe. Really liked how you formed it all; the story, the climax, etc. Who0t! And I loved how you used the characters, like InuYasha with his cussing and bad-kid recollections. And how Rin turned away from that 'friend' who gave her the joint.
You, awesome writer, yes.

Oo; My first reaction was like, "OMG! Rin's taking drugs!!" And then I read the rest of it...
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I love how you do these kinds of things, though! Make us think one thing, and let it turn out to be something completely different. ^_^

aww... that's so cute...

...i thought it was drugs... 0.o but nice and cute twist!! I couldn't imagine Rin doing them.. and yet I did... but when you told us what it was - I'm shutting up... beautifully written!