this fic is so cool! too bad you didn't put any lemons in it. waah.

Oh that was halirious...and very hot...

oh so strangely peverted and interesting... I'll be reading the sequel tomorrow! It was so damn peverted that I wanted to turn away... but couldn't for some odd reason... (maybe I'm just a yaoi fan, that's why XD) Good job!

good thing there's a sequel^^lol

Love this! It's really yummy. Rei and Kai have always been my favorites and I love Rai and Kei just as much!

i don't exactly like the sound of 'rai' lol. but nvm.

yup. you ARE really evil.

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

yummy XD

i like the second kai! cute!

this sorts of reminds me of jackie chan adventures.

HEY! OMG THIS FIC IS SO FUNNY! I LOVED IT! I JUST CONTIUED TO READ UNTIL I FINISHED! OMG IT WAS FUNNY! REALLY FUNNY!

I sat on my butt and read this entire story, and there was not one lemon in it. Merely implied ones. -_- I need solid writings to go along with my fantasies.

Pheonix,
Hot dogs?

good please hurry up and update

good