That was good but it could've been longer.

Aw! Thats beautiful! really sweet... very in character. only wish it was longer )

Stories like this are always so bittersweet when you think about how thoroughly fate (or Jerk Whedon) screwed up things for Buffy and Angel. Hm...

Wow! I loved it. i teared up! A great example of what i think would have happened! Well done and please continue!

xx

Kat.

That last line was really good. I liked the hole idea a lot but that last line and the moth analogy was great. Short and Brilliant!

Oh, that was really sad, but quite beautiful in a peotic kind of way at the same time.

You seem to capture Angel's feelings really well.