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LilNinjaWolf 8/31/11 . chapter 1
Great fic! I don't really see any resolution either and think your ending is perfect. :)
BubblyShell22 3/23/11 . chapter 1
Awesome story, Terran. I can see Leo and Raph acting this way. Now they realize that they can't change who they are and must just accept it. Loved the ending though. Looks like Splinter might have to mediate another fight. Nicely done.

The Bubbly One,

Shell
Noname4321 10/1/10 . chapter 1
XD noe that is a good answer to the problem now, what would happen if they were discovered to be fighting by Splinter? XD
Happybubblex3 7/4/10 . chapter 1
wow this fic was GREAT!

And I LOVED the ending, I really LOVED it-

Raphael glanced behind him. "Think we're far enough?" Without waiting for an answer he turned and punched Leo in the jaw.

Leo staggered for a second and then grinned. "Yeah I hope so."

Oh my god, that was so cool... it kinda reminds me of "Fight club"!

I agree with the others, it's totally realistic and you did a great job :)
Water-Soter 12/5/08 . chapter 1
*pff* I guess they did learn something after all, though I doubt that was what Master Splinter wanted. Nice job! Great ending.
aronoiiel 5/8/07 . chapter 1
That was a pretty awesome fic! I loved how you came up with such a unique way for them to deal with all that baggage hehe thanks for sharing it. _
freakanature 5/2/07 . chapter 1
*stares in utter wonder* That... was so amazing! You portrayed every character exactly as I would expect them to react in that situation! *can hardly say anything* AMAZING!

ME
CelicaChick 4/30/07 . chapter 1
boy oh boy do they love to fight...
Jessiy Landroz 7/11/06 . chapter 1
Ya know? I don't think I've read this story before, it was pretty cute, in an 'agressivly-brotherly bonding' kind of way, *grins* and the change in text layout was a but distracting at first, it was acceptable, I guess

boy, Leo and Raph sure knwo when to pick up and then drop a fight, eh? and Mike almost got in trouble trying to 'keep an eye on them' too XD Don's the smart one to stay out of it, too

but a brotherly spinoff at the end, gues it's not over till it's over ;D good job
Okami1 3/25/06 . chapter 1
O_O This was awesomely radical dude! LOL. Seriously, I truely enjoyed reading this ficcy. It's nice to see the two understand each other now, even if nothing was actually resolved. Keep up the great work!
Goddess of Idun 1/13/06 . chapter 1
I liked this story. Somewhere down, it has a meaning, and if you don't watch out, you may miss it. (God, was that me being deep? Weird.) Great work!
Tewi 10/13/05 . chapter 1
sneaky little...turtles.
Cynlee 9/18/05 . chapter 1
This was very funny and sort of reminds me of a time when I told two boys, whom I was so tired of repeatedly and I mean REPEATEDLY telling NOT to fight (and I swear, their parents were in to see me at least once a week one month because of it)- I'd had enough, and I told them to KILL each other. I told them to beat the crap out of eachother!

Naturally, being the contrary boys they were, they didn't do it.
Flora 8/25/05 . chapter 1
Hot damn that was good!

*bows before the master*
SoonPersephoneAgain 8/11/05 . chapter 1
Oh that was great. I liked their solution of regularly beating the shell out of eachother. Nicely done.
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