Great work.

Usagi-chan…
I loved that bit. It reminded me of the Stars manga when rei and Minako are on the roof confrtoned by the starlights and she thinks the same thing.

Very nice. I'm glad you didn't go overboard but I wonder what artimis was thinking the whole time? poor kitty cat.

I love this story. I've also read the one that comes after from the pgsm fanfic website. I love your writing style, and i can't wait to read more!

hey thats cool.Hey,um...I don't get the "I"Stuff.hm..

*cries* That was so kawaii and pulled the strings of my heart throughout. It's tragic the love she found to pull her from her desire to meet with death was one so ill-fated, knowing that it could never last whether he died or not as he was her sworn enemy. I wanted to shake them and go "Do it now not later!" as it was such an intense sequence for such a short piece, your talents never end =)
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::sigh:: Oh, god, I really did love that episode...I'm betting you were screaming, "KISS, YOU BLOODY IDIOTS!" like I was...::smirk:: But friggin' hell, the man had to die...::sniffle:: ::suppressing sobs:: ::shuddering sigh:: But, yes, a Minako/Zoisite fan, I am. Thanks for writing them so well!

i have not seen pgsm yet but i like your story. i like your writing style. ^^

What a great story! Very well written, and I just love this pairing! Great job! I hope to read more Zoicite + Minako from you!

Oh! Very nicely written! I loved all the emotions that went through this, and it had a great twist with her death. This is wonderfully written. You didn't rush it, which is great, and I'm glad that it didn't have a perfect ending, it made the effect so much greater. Good job!

Beautifully written. You conveyed Minako's feelings well through your choice of words. I thoroughly enjoyed it.