How bitter-sweet. It's very well written though.

This is cute! I love the Thoru and Kyou pairing! I think you did a great job! So deep! In a way there was poetry in it too! But please I would love to see what happens!

Aw *cheers* that was amazingly adorable and so sweet! Great job!

..it sucked. As much as I hate to say, you cut it off at a bad ** time. it needs a CONTINUATION! Tohru will NEVER know kyo LIKES HER unless you CONTINUE the story. >