Whoa...sad and creepy at the same time. I think this is going on my favorites list. Great job!

Weird. Creepy. Like.

I love this. You are a very skilled writer, with a WONDERFUL ability to create those weird feelings within your writing! Wish I was as good as you! I was practically scared shitless at the end. BTW, it was Rinoa. I know. Cuz I'm special. Heh. Soz. I'm Crack-Anne, BTW. So yesh. Rock on!

Great execution, magi. Could've told me earlier! I really like what you did with this...it seems some people were a little confused as to what was happening, but I did not find it hard to understand. Then again, I knew what was going to happen, so maybe I don't count. In any case, great work, as usual.

(And for those who asked, yes, I am still workin gon TDOTL, however I'm concentraating my efforts on AFO at the moment...)

Isn't she working on The Dying of the Light anymore? And I thought that All For One was finished. Ah, whatever.

I thought you did a good job on this, a very good job. It was touching, confusing, so...Squall-like. A perfect 110%.

*Very* nice. I like the unspoken doom he's commited himself to—after all, there's no one to keep him from wandering, lost, in time, now.

what a great ficition. even though i do not understand who's missing? a one shot? man! i wanna know i wanna know!

Hey, just a little bit of CC:

The other reviewers' confusion over the missing character shouldnt be there. Perhaps if the mirror gives Squall some images of what could have happened with him and Rinoa, it would be easier to tell that it's Rinoa who's missing.

so...who was missing?

was it Rinoa? must have been. i don't see how it could have been anyone else.

great first chapter. if there is more, i can't wait for it.

Ciao

Queen

...hm...I think, I think I understand what happened...but then again...I don't know If I don't...hm...I was good though. Although, the setting wasn't very solid but I think that it's in Ultimecia's castle right? Anyway, it was very well written...but...a little weird. But then again, weirdness is a given in all pieces of fiction right?