Oh my God, I loved this it actually made me imagine

the story and i loved how it made me read more.

Please delete this story, Harry Potter doesn't need anymore Mary-Sues.

more! it's great!

That was GREAT! You know what i really, really liked? The bracelet, that was neat, the way it loooked and it's purpose. OK, I love stuff about Atlantis so of course I'll ead that, but I wish you would not sop the other one. Maybe just take a break, then do some more. Please!