Very intresting. For the chapters I read, I would say this certainly sounds like Dragonball. But, I felt as if you used the word "said" too often, and some spots were not clearified as much as the could (especialy if you were not trying to hold back any information), but other than that it was a well rounded story with a nice clift-hanger. This is one I would concider reading when I'm not busy.

Great story!

great story

Nice. Peace out! *Thumbs up!*

OHH! That stoty was sick. So exciting I absoluley loved! WO! I am soo happy and hyper loved the story. I know you've already finished n have sequels. But still its so good I had to review. LOVED IT!

Why did you make Goten such a shitty character ?

I just want to say it was one of the best fanfiction stories I have read. I liked how you really didn't make just one character the focal point it was a few. Great story. I loved the whole Goten and Soyna thing that was really good and liked how Soyna was Future Trunks daughter that was really good. I liked how Goten played a big part in everything as well.

I just want to say that I hope you would consider in trying to continue with another saga cause this one was really good.

Great story. I don't reall understand what is going on with Krad and the scars and stuff, and I certainly don't really understand Soyna,but story is developing well.

I swear if I was near you I'd give you a cookie!

One of the best fics I've read. Loved it the entire way through...no bs. I'm off to read the others. Laterz

Fairy tales can come true it can happen to you...it is taking me forever to read this story with work and classes.

OMG...its getting really depressing, in a good way.

Why poor Goten?

Talk about angst

Jesus, Jesus, Jesus, moving on.

You ever read something and like you start to breath really hard and then you stop...well you want let me die, so I'll move on to the next chapter.