Hi I love your story! :) Please continue writing it! :) I want to know who Beckie's father is? And please let Sarah and James become a couple if you can? I would hate to see that romance die. :) I think Robert and Beckie would be a great couple! :) Yourwriting is so insightful, you are like Jane Austen of the twenty first century! :) I can't wait to read more of this story! Please write more! I am eager to read of the Carisferds dinner! :) Is Beckie's father Christian? You need to tieup all these questions. I am enthralled with your writing style, so heart felt, simple, and poetic. :) Keep writing, a talent like yours should not be wasted. :) I love your story, and I hope to read more of your stories in the future! :) Have a lovely day, and happy 2012! I hope it brings you immense joy and success in this year and all the years of your life! :)

this is so moving, please consider continuing this story

This story is so touching! I've really liked reading it and I hope you can continue it and finish someday. emmy

oh what happens next?

I really like this story, which makes me a little sad when I see how long it's been since you've updated. A Little Princess is probably one of my absolute favorite movies, though I'm sorry to say I've never read the book. I really like all the interaction between the characters and how you keep them true to their personality. Anyway, wonderful job. I hope you plan on continuing this story, but if not, I enjoyed what you wrote nonetheless. Thanks, and good luck in whatever you plan to do. :)

Wow! This is an absolutely amazing story! It has just enough elements of the original story to keep it grounded, yet it goes off in ways that are unique and adventurous. You are pacing the tale extremely well. Not too much happens in one chapter and not too little. Each chapter moves the plot onward or opens new doors to questions and answers just waiting to be discovered. Amazing job. I can't wait to read more!

This is a very good story, I have not actually seen the movie, although I have read the book. This is very plausable and I love how you make the characters seem real. More elaboration on the specific details would be nice, descriptions of places and new people, I love how you brought Becky into the story and I hope that she finds the father and he gets what's coming to him. Update as soon as you can possibly find the time too. This is a Brilliant story and if you abandon it I will probably send you an angry reveiw on the chapter before this one. Good Luck, Happy Writing!

By far, this is the most amazing story I have read. Magnificent- overall very detailed. I think this is a great story! Please continue. It took my a couple of days, but I enjoyed it. I can't wait to see what will happen with Master James and Sara! Please update! Once again, I truly adore this story.

Love,

Roselina )

hey amazingly ibterresting story just keepp reviewing just keep reviewing please!

Very well written!

OMG so good, this is the first fan fic I've read in a while and I picked an awesome one! WRITE MORE! ps I love James

I read the first chapter. It is really good. I would sugest putting in more spacest between chapters, the way you have it is kinda hard to read. you lose your place eaily

You have a lovely way of writing! I just love readint this stroy it really pulls me in. You also have a way of misdirecting people which I just love! It puts suspense. I can't wait until you update this when you have time. Good job and keep it up! :D

More plz!

are you going to write more?