Okay - are you going to pursue this? What a terrible place to stop!

hope you write more

Hm...I like this. Please update this soon. Not a Mary Sue? Hm...does that mean Erik will have another chance at love? :)

I miss this story :(

Whoa...dun dun dun! Continue.

C'mon, you gotta update! I'm loving this!

Pretty good I would love to see more.

oh, i love this. very good. is there more? soon? maybe?

always,

LostS.

Wow, this one seems like it could turn out to be interesting as well. Looking forward to more chapters.

oh, cool, continue please!

Huh. I find myself wondering why you abandoned this one. It looks most promising. Perhaps give it a second glance and see if it's worth your time again. ;-) Or not. You're the creative mastermind.

-JB-

Whoa! Towards the end of this chapter, I felt sure this would end up more cliched.. the idea of Erik and Christine's daughter has been used before.. But Erik's reaction caught me off-guard... agghh i want to know what happens next! :)

This story is extremely interesting. I would love to see where it goes. UPDATE! It's almost like having a cliffhanger that will never be resolved. I like how you kept Erik very in character, without making him completely fluffy. Please update.

Would you be continuing this with one last chapter, by any chance? Coz it's really good! No matter how cliche-ish the idea is.

Ah! I have been an avid reader of your's since the very beginning of The Innocent. I hadn't realized you'd started to write something new. Continue to update. Other stories like this are so boring and repetitive. You write with a different voice and make it refreshing to read. Please update soon for us!

Kind regards.

Wow, this is really ggod, update soon!