A great story. Very good.

You know I always thought the concept of Obi-Wan having to wait helplessly before getting a crack at Maul was interesting but under used in the movie. Cool to get a real glimpse into Obi-Wan's head. Lucas should take a cue from the writers here when it comes to character development. Keep it up.

That's sad! I liked it, but the end was kind of odd.

A very sad story! A well-written story though! Keep on writing more Obi-wan/Qui-Gon fanfic and I'll definitely keep on reading them. (10)

*sniff sniff* This story really gets you involved with the feelings and emotions going on in Obi-Wan's mind. BRAVO...keep it up, PJ