Holy wow! This is really cool. I wish I could say more, but I can't get over the awe of reading this. Really cool. _

*Cries*

Beatiful

Really, Beatiful

Quite nice.

Your writings are very seducing. I can't stop reading them and I hope you never stop too. It was very deep into the presence of a Guardian Force; how they really react to their surroundings.

Wow, good fic! Is it a one shot or will you be continueing?

Hm...interesting. cool...it was a little short for my liking...but it was...intense. I've never actually READ anything about Eden. Like usually in fics, they leave her (or is Eden actually a he in the game?) out. I liked it. You really portrayed Eden for how powerful she really is. After all, she is the ONLY GF in the game to destroy the damage barrier...

Interesting. The Nietzche quotation seems to be in there just for the sake of being there, though.