That was beautiful. That's all I can say really, beautiful in a twisted sort of way, but still beautiful.

You are such an amazing writer! God, I hate every single thing I've ever written right now. Keep writing!

Perfect!! You can write some very powerful lines! Going on Faves!
Maggie

Very well writen, it reminds me of something. Did you take your idea from something? Well done!

wow, deep...very good, i love it.^_^

Very chilling. The ballroom theme was very well portrayed.

Wow. that was awesome.
And original. Not too many original fics floating around out there. (At least I think it's original...*wonders*)

I'd go with consttuctive critisism if I had any, but I don't. I honestly think that there would be no way to improve this.

Completely spellbinding. And it would make sense that the journal would be more complex than first believed...

Wait I don't get it who was it? Who was dancing? Who made them dance? I don't get it! I just don't get it! Anyway even though I didn't figure it out and I probably never will this story is awesome. Very powerfully written. Definetly adding it to my fav.'s . The only thing I have to say is that you should drop more hints in the story as to who you are talking about. I'm not saying that you should come right out and say it because it is fun to figure it out on your own but you just need to give a few more hints. Other than that keep writing! ^ ^