Please continue the story!! It's funny and very interesting!! I want to read more AriEpros!!

UPDATE THIS SOON! This is turning out to be a wicked awesome story and WE WANT MORE!


Well, dramatics aside, I really do hope you continue with this story. It's very well written and delightful, actually. XD I loved it, so keep it up!

XD ... When do we see more of Epros? He's my favorite character!! Poor Ari ... He's so depressed... ); So, when's the next chapter? You haven't placed this story on hiatus, have you?

SAY IT ISN'T SO!

I like this story...A lot!
And everyone is in character!
Even Ari!
I've always viewed him as the type of gloomy person and I'm a fan of EprosAri
What was up with the swords?
That was cool though, poor Ari being ignored.
Anyways I like how you made big bull, in the game I think he called Ari little cub, little brother...I don't remember I have to go and play for the millionth time again haha :D
Ari is cool, he looks cool/cute, and he's...Well I can't say that would be a spoiler ha XD
Plz update soon?

*sigh* It's a sin that I have not left a review for such a well written piece of work. I am sad that it does not seem that this shall be updated, but the two chapters have been enjoyable. I loved how you made Madril seem like an actual town with it's own unique attributes.

Why aren't you updating? -pouts- I love Okage.. -pokes- Update, soon! This is a good fic.

This is a cute story.. Too bad I started reading it about 2 months after you updated it.. But great job, write more, please! It's not often you read an Okage story.

nice fic! this is the best okage fic i've read on ff.net- please update soon :)

I like the story! It's not often that you find an Okage fic around, and it's even rarer that you find one that's good. Please write more chapters, and more Epros too, although the rhyming is tough...

Oh, and you're right about Stan. He is ugly at the end of the game... but I like Epros's bowtie!

Please write more!!
Kitty

doo doop doo...

look at me. I'm such a dork, reviewing my own story. XP

I WILL BE YOUR REGULAR REVIEWER FOR THIS STORY! Mwahaha.
Hehe, I agree on how they shouldn't have made Stan so oogly.
Stan: *glares*
Honestly, if they didn't give him such a big nose and chin, I think he would have been fine. The fanarts got my hopes up. I'm still devoted to serving Stan-sama, though!
Anyway, about this chapter, I LOVE how you described Madril, although it is my favorite town in the entire game. I also love how Linda babies her microphone and leaves it to rest in her splint. XD
Let's see, now for constructive criticism. I think you made Rosalyn too quiet. No offense intended or anything, but usually she's so loud and bossy... you know? I get the impression that you like her a lot and you want to downplay her rudeness. Am I right? I do like how you made her seem to ignore her injuries from the Masterless Swords, though. That seems like a hero. Good going. Other than that, you've got the personalities down perfect. Especially Linda and Kisling. I love how Linda talks in third person. She reminds me of myself. XD

Keep it going! If not for yourself, for me! I crave Okage now that I've beaten the game.

And I love the thought of Epros x Ari. Almost as much as Kisling x Ari. *dirty girl* XD;;

First of all, I have to ask if you've beaten the game. :3 I did. It took me a year and a half. O_o;
Um, next, very very good. I like how descriptive it is. And the Kisling part in his sleep, very like him.
“Mhmm...nggm...ghosts...ghosts everywhere...I wonder if they...nhmm...would like some tea...

^^YAY! BABZ FOUND A PLACE TO POST! that doesn't nessesarily mean that i read it...but the love's there! right, well, we read, and um..liked (?) it. (if it's any good, we liked it, if its not...well then, we'll let you feel loved, and say we did). not haveing any time to actually *read* the story, but sarah did get through about half of it, and its pretty good...besides the fact that we havent played the game and so sarah has no idea what you're writing about -_-* heh.