 Elves of the Moon 2009-06-23 . chapter 21Since it's been sinc 2006 you updated I understand very well there is only so little hope for another chapter to come up any time soon, but still... I'm adding this to story alert to make sure :D
This really is a most wonderful story, I absolutely love the Kai-angst (feels slightly ashamed that she so much likes to see her fav character harmed) Bryan and Tala are just wonderful (is denying Bryan can be hurt too badly, dieing is simply not possible... yes, denying reality)! Not to forget Rei (hugs all of the boys)
I liked the 'side' story of Max and Takao and wondered how they would link up with everything that was happening... Well this last chapter explained that for sure o-0
Should you decide to continue I'll be sure to follow it,
otherwise I just wanted to let you know how awesome I think this story is.
Lhune |
 Jay 2009-03-22 . chapter 1 I miss this fic |
 LunaTaichou 2008-10-02 . chapter 21O_o
Please don`t leave the fic like that!
I need to know the ending! - happy ending?
You did an awesome job so far - so please finish it! :D |
 -usagi018- 2008-07-29 . chapter 21Please don't kill off Bryan!! D: and awesome story btw~! -thumbs up- XD Awesome cliffhanger too! but don't think i'm happy with it... YOU GOT TO UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! |
 iShiznitch 2007-06-20 . chapter 21Oh...
My...
GOD!
Nearly a year... with this kind of chapter.. and no update?! I'm going into shock here!
I would... love you forever and ever and EVER were you to update this baby.
...because I, and hundreds of other people, are in love with it, and are counting on you to update it!
Looking at your profile tells me your laptop is dead. Is that recent?
No matter, please, please, PLEASE update soon. I will throw away all pride and beg, on my hands and knees, for an update.
Much love,
Rio Hime |
 Black Cat Red Phoenix 2007-01-29 . chapter 21Awesome so far. I wonder who kidnapped Max? Couldn't be Delilah because she's in Russia. Well, I'll find out in the next chapter. Update soon!
Black Cat |
 Angel Spirit 2006-12-21 . chapter 21Hm...how to not hurt/kill an author who leaves a cliff hanger like THIS one? ^-~v I havith the feeling that Tyson's not dead, at least from the way you wrote it, so I won't kill you...for now ^-^ but poor Tyson will probably be VERY upset when he finds out that Maxie's missing...and why oh why do I have the feeling that Max and Bryan are going to be used to make Rei, Kai and Tala do something they REALLY don't want to do? *covers eyes* Update soon...pwease? I really must find out what happens... |
 Lady Dusk -Raku- 2006-12-19 . chapter 21-screams- Are you insane? What kind of cruel being ARE you? ~_~
I want this amazing story updated pronto! >=(
Too many things happening at once. I think my heart stopped. Oh yeah-- *passes out*
-LDR- |
 LiPhi 2006-11-02 . chapter 21=o!
i've just read it al
(took me ages!)
Aw Rei and Kai at the start!
NO BRYAN!!
MAX!! NO NO NO
*cries*
how could you do that!! Max is ok right =|??
he has to be ok!
he has to be *cries some more*
EP I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
You now have a fan for life =]
^_^ |
 Shadowy Fluffball 2006-07-31 . chapter 21CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! |
 max-4-ever 2006-07-29 . chapter 21 Wow...sorry for not signing in or reveiwing. computer problems.
max: i was shot! *cries* and im always kidnapped!
Kai: yay
me: *sweatdrops* well i think this is a great chapter..dispite maxs..*ahem* out burst...
Max: IM going hard core in my own fanfiction! I will not be a push over anymore!! >.<
Kai:...jesh...
me: there there maxy hee hee *gives him some cookies*
max: yay *eats cookies* whats going on again?
me and kai: *sweatdrops*...
max: what..?
me: anyway. see you next chapter! no problems here!
kai: hnn
max: cookies! |
 kaizgirl1 2006-07-23 . chapter 21hey!great story!i love it so much.god its soo good im really into it!pls update.im at a loss of words rite now.one of the best stories ive read.u go man!more kai rei action plss and some tyson max as well. |
 Chiikie 2006-07-22 . chapter 21OMG, you have got to update as soon as you can! I cannot believe that you just ended the chapter that way! Arrg! How could you! sigh. |
 evildictionaryninja 2006-07-15 . chapter 21oh. My. Gosh. You know, in all honesty we should all have silenced guns (remind you of something?) pointed at your temple for this! Well I have to admit its good. And your writing is good. Seriosly. Nice cliffhanger. Never mind that I wanna kill you for it but... what can I do but wait for the next update? So i hope you intend to update soon... or do you need some motivation *takes out two small guns and an M-16* *grins*... target practice.
Ja ne! :P |
 Neena14 2006-07-14 . chapter 21WAY TO GO!
NOW WE RE GETTING SUM ACTION!
SORRY FER THE LATE REVIEW BUT HEY...
ANYWAY, UR DOING GR8
UPDATE SOON |