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| AngelKougaeri 2005-08-23 ch 20,  | abuseI can't believe i never reviewed this-i'm such a dumb idiot lol. Read this a few weeks ago and thought it rocked! AnGeL |
| Birlygirl 2005-07-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseHi! I've just started reading the fic and am not all the way through, but I have noticed your question about whether or not you should write a prequel. I don't know if anybody else has answered yet, but I would love to see one! I really like what I am reading so far; I think you have a really good plot and the story is very well-written, so I would like to see what else you come up with. And, in case I don't find out as I keep readiing, I might need a prequel t find out who Mackenzie's mom is! |
| calistra 2005-07-24 ch 20, | abuseLoved the story, but I would have loved to see them bump into Max and Alec before the end. A sequel would be nice, see how TC is and what other good things happened when they changed the past. |
| calistra 2005-07-01 ch 19, | abusebrilliant, can't wait for the finale. great characters, great use of original characters, nice twists throughout. |
| elle6778 2005-06-22 ch 9, | abuseMackenzie was a menace. Why on earth does she want to pierce Benjamin's ear?! God, those two really behave like kids! Keep up the good work! |
| elle6778 2005-06-22 ch 6, | abuseArgh! What's with the cliffhanger?! Hehe! I liked it! As I was reading the last chapter, it seemed to me that Mackenzie sounded just like Max when she's denying a relationship with Benjamin. Did you do it on purpose? |
| elle6778 2005-06-22 ch 4, | abuseThis chapter is really sweet. I loved the way Alec did not doubt her story. And the way he asked what's going on with her and Benjamin. Hehe! Typical father! |
| elle6778 2005-06-22 ch 2, | abuseHmm...I'm guessing her father is Alec! Hehe! Well, I guess I will just press the 'next' button to find out! |
| Aleja21 2005-06-21 ch 18, | abusegreat update, the action scenes werent tat bad. you should give yourself more credit. keep it going nd update soon please. |
| jess 2005-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseUPDATE PLEASE! :) |
| Maria656 2005-05-21 ch 17, | abuseJust read all if this-for some reason I hadn't before; the summary had me leary that it might be M/A, but I was pleasantly surprised. Will keep reading! |
| suenooneus 2005-05-14 ch 16, | abuseAww cute little chapter, eventhough the mood was sombre. I liked the background info there-explaining a few things. Keep writing Cheers Su |
| BurgAndy3721 2005-05-14 ch 16, | abuseOk so I'm trying to reason this out and the same question keeps coming back, Is it even possible to finish the story if you killed mackenzie here? I'm thinking no, but then again you never know. You might do it just to prove you can. I hope that she's alright I mean the supply run's coming up right? Wow you need to update this again...and soon! If you do, maybe I'll review again. 'Til then i'm waiting (and sitting with my fingers crossed hoping that the brib works :P) |
| BurgAndy3721 2005-04-26 ch 15, | abusevery short. Not that I have the right to complain, this being my first review. I definatley liked it. How come when I picture Benji drunk the work "cute" comes to mind. closely followed by the work "annoying"? Questions questions. anyways I really like this fic. Please please please please (hehehehe) update soon. :) |
| suenooneus 2005-04-25 ch 15, | abuseFun update! I just finished my exams and I'm in a generous mood so I'll drop a review :P... Benjamin getting drunk, or rather the ordinary in him getting drunk was an unique concept. Cute little explanation. You are right about the length of the chapter... so didn't cut it. Anywho the developing relationship between Kenzie and Benjamin is sweet. Keep writing, Cheers Su |