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| vampyfreak 2006-02-03 ch 5,  | abusegreat ff! |
| Rach112 2005-11-30 ch 5, | abuseI'm really enjoying this story! Hope you update soon! Danny is great, you do a wonderful job of writing his character, Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| rozzy07 2005-09-04 ch 5, | abuseJust found this story and it is really really good. Great back story showing how Danny Taylor came to be. Really wish you will give us another chapter son.. PLEASE! |
| Spike 2005-07-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseYay! I was just thinking about how much I wanted a new chapter. Keep up the good work- Spike |
| Sonata Arctica89 2005-06-27 ch 5, | abuseWow, finally an update! I was just about to give up on this story! Thanks so much for the update and PLEASE don't make us wait that long for another. |
| anmodo 2005-06-25 ch 5, | abuse"Father Orlando Taylor" -- nice development. Thanks so much for continuing this. It was one of my favorites. I love the end conversation between danny and the father. |
| Zonya 2005-01-30 ch 4, anon. | abuseOMG! This is wonderful! I'm eager to know how it continues. Zonya |
| loozy 2004-10-31 ch 4, | abusePlease udpate! Please! I am so very stunned at this story! I beg you, udpate! |
| painfulclarity 2004-10-30 ch 4, | abuseGah. Gah. This is absolutely wonderful. Cannot get over how wonderful it is. I have no concrit. Just ravings about how fantastic that fic was. More soon or I might just die, please. |
| Sonata Arctica89 2004-10-18 ch 4, | abuseyey sorry i didnt review beofe but its still really good...ur even taking facts from the real wat wow lol |
| LatinaChiquitaBonita 2004-10-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseWow, chica, I really love this fic! And believe me, I have seen much worse attempts at spanish - don't worry aout it! Nad no way is your ENGLISH mangled! You're description is fantastic, and it's wierd, coz now i have this idea that this IS Danny's past... Update soon! |
| anmodo 2004-10-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love your take on Danny's backstory. You make me believe that this is really what his path was. Great job. |
| CTB 2004-10-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseFantastica chica! I'm really enjoying this story so far and no te preocupes, languages are meant to be mangled. Honest. |
| Sonata Arctica89 2004-09-24 ch 3, | abuseinteresting story keep going its good |
| Ice Queen1 2004-09-02 ch 3, | abuseSo far it's pretty good. However, besides showing just how awful Danny's life was before he joined FBi and cleaned up his act, there' snot much else to it. I think you created more of a driving force in chapter three, but it needs more. I hope you keep writing, you've painted the background very well. Better than most writers on here. |