I think this is a great start! A couple of tense flubs, but even I had those before I started chapterizing my fic, lol! I still have to proofread in edit! I do like Honoka Kaika; I'd like to see a little more about what took place two years earlier. I think it would put a lot of what went on in this chapter into perspective. By the by, I'm assuming this takes place during the kids'(KYT) third year in high school or the year after, right? ^_^ Can't wait to read more!

**! AGAIN! WRITE MORE! Let me edit it first. THEN WRITE MORE.