*faint claps*
I ish fascinated by your writing style, Mister Icekweem. This was a rather itneresting piece to read. I've honestly never read a Zita/Dib fic before. And it's a shame that nobody writes as deep as this anymore... well, men anyways. I think this wonderful work, basically. I hope to see more! Off to your other ficcy-things I go!

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I'm actually glad I don't do drugs now, I need every braincell I can get to comprehend the massive ammount of complexities incorporated into even one of your stories. Otherwise, I'd be incapable of doing as such! Keep up the good work!!

Heh, heh...good for Dib, standing up to her like that. You really captured his self-assertive nature. He's not the sort to take being used, after all. Good job.

I think it was great. So what if Dibby was a bit out of character! I think at the parts that mattered he was very incharacter.
Out of the whole fic I loved these line best:
"YOU'RE CRAZY, DIB! CRAZY, I TELL YA!"
Hey, maybe I am. But ya know what?
I kinda like it. (I prefer it over the alternative)
They are the kinda words I live by and they really made the ending for me. This fic works well as one shot and I can see what you mean about how continuing it would be difficult. Still it was a great read and for a romance very original. In short I loved it. (^*^)

-dances- :D that was good. I don't normally like any kind of relationship fictions except for an occasional Zim and Gaz that aren't horribly out of character. But I liked this. Reminds me of what my friend had to go through for almost a full year. Finally we convinced him that it wasn't worth it. It basically just went like this, only for an extremely long perioud of time, and that stupid... daugther (XD) of a dreaded weasel would bring her preppy friends along on their "dates", so incase she got bored with him she could talk to them. She actually SAID that to his face. XD My other friends were like, "Ask him out and then he'll stop dating her" XD I was like, "Haha, nah, fark you"
Ahh, but you don't care. XD

Aw, finally someone wrote a story about MY failed relationships! Very realistic dialogue. I like it a lot. You go Dib!

Yes! Yes, I shall review because that was a great story! I especially liked the parenthesis. They added a lot to the writing. Zita's words seem to hold a threat... "! Come back this instant or I'll... I'll do something HORRIBLE!"

Yeah, that part. I can't help but wonder what horrible thing she'd do... whatever the case, wether you continue or not, I liked it. Wow... that was a pointless review. o.o

Keep up the good work! :D

This was really good! I especially like the little extra words in the parentheses . . . it's like, you could read the story without them, and it would still make sense, but they make it better, really . . . I don't know. But I really like this, and I'm definitely adding it to my favorite stories list.
*~Bagatelle

Wow! That was cool! I enjoyed this one, I normally don't like Dib/Zita romance (I read it... with tolerance) but this was good. I like the parenthesis, most definately.

I think this makes a good one shot. The ending is perfect for a one shot. I don't think it should be continued anyway, but that's just me.

Hm... criticism, can't think. I would normally say explain how they got in a relationship in a first place, but it's only a one-shot, to me one-shots don't always need explaining.

Yeh.