 brick-red-wall 2006-06-30 . chapter 1That was very cute. I liked it very much! =] |
 Slugabed 2005-06-12 . chapter 1 God, I really do love your style of writing. It's really, really lovely, and I hope you continue with it. I didn't think it was very possible to find it on Fanfic. Most of the time that is spent on Fanfic involves insulting terribly written fics with bad grammar and out-of-character characters. (Admittedly, I also sometimes insult the authors, especially when they add redundant details of their own lives between story lines; I'm sure a large portion of their later installed chapters are 'dedicated' to me.) Anyway, my grammar and spelling is awful too, I don't deny that, but still ... I can have double standards. Damn, I'm digressing. My point is, you write really brilliantly and and beautifully. That, and you don't ruin Harry and Ginny's relationship, and change into a cheap one. |
 Slugabed 2005-06-12 . chapter 1 God, I really do love your style of writing. It's really, really lovely, and I hope you continue with it. I didn't think it was very possible to find it on Fanfic. Most of the time that is spent on Fanfic involves insulting terribly written fics with bad grammar and out-of-character characters. (Admittedly, I also sometimes insult the authors, especially when they add redundant details of their own lives between story lines; I'm sure a large portion of their later installed chapters are 'dedicated' to me.) Anyway, my grammar and spelling is awful too, I don't deny that, but still ... I can have double standards. Damn, I'm digressing. My point is, you write really brilliantly and and beautifully. That, and you don't ruin Harry and Ginny's relationship, and change into a cheap one. |
 LaurelinElentari 2004-09-29 . chapter 1Aw, it's not quite fluffly enough for me to feel the need to floss, but it's just enough to make me smile. Cute story, but then again they're all so good, I don't think I could say anything bad about it anyway. |
 egg-n-head 2004-09-03 . chapter 1aw this fic is so sweet
i love how you put your feelings and emotions into your writing. You have a great style.
i dont normally read H/G but i liked this one alot
keep writing, you do it so well
egg-n-head |
 sweetmelody 2004-08-31 . chapter 1Aw... that's so sweet. *Wonderful* ending.
H/G and R/H. They're meant to be, written in the stars... I completely support the OBHWF theory. If Harry marries Ginny, then Hermione will become Harry's sister, and Ron will become Harry's brother, and Hermione will become Ginny's sister, and everyone will live happily ever after. :-D |
 Loki Mischeif-Maker 2004-07-27 . chapter 1Wow. your discription was amazing, and I think you've got the characters just right. I love the subtlety of the romance in this one, how Ginny doesn't realize it to the end. It just felt, right, you know?
And your discription was wonderful. I'm definately recomending this fic!
Cheers! |
 xiaoxiao 2004-07-25 . chapter 1I really liked the way you played on their shared "dark experiences". It's so like Harry to sulk until he realizes that Ginny has been through hell too. |
 unicornsrock5 2004-07-24 . chapter 1aw thats so cute THEY SHOULD HAVE KISSED THAT WAS WAY TO G-RATED but anyway you dont need to rite more for this story its so cute. i would add you to my favorite authors list but i already did so oh well |
 griffin14 2004-07-16 . chapter 1OMG love it 'nough said! |
 CravingPassion 2004-07-15 . chapter 1Wonderful.
I am truly jealous. |
 Alasken_chick 2004-07-13 . chapter 1 aw.. that was cute! plz make more 2 it all tho u don't have 2. it was a cute lil ficcy! Lolz! heh heh! =D |
 mary-v 2004-07-09 . chapter 1This was excellent! It works great as a stand alone!! I loved it, and I hope you update Sleeping beauties... soon! Hopefully that Writer's block will dissapear soon!
~maria~ |
 PrincessSaraSolo 2004-07-07 . chapter 1I loved it. I definitely teared up a bit. Obviously the last line made me smile, which kind of squeezed the tears out. |
 MissCorker 2004-07-06 . chapter 1Great job Jamie!! (or is it Margaret?)
The idea was beautiful, and so was the light metaphor. Little things from real life, make the best stories I think!
--big fluffy mounds of white clouds that were rolling by oblivious to everything but the wind.--
I don't know why, but I particularly liked this. It's not really important to the plot, but little touches like this really add to the story!
I also liked that they didn't kiss at the end. I half wanted them to, but not really, cause it wouldn't have fit with their characters. The holding hands was just as sweet, and made more sense (plus a REALLY great surprize!)
Keep writing, I love all of your stuff! ~Miss Corker |