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Cherubino
2006-03-25 . chapter 8
Thank you for your stories. It is very rare to find good believable Mac story that is focused on the case. You got Mac down pat, I can 'hear' him in this story and that's always my Lithmus test for good fanfiction. Interesting that you chose this particular handicap (for the lack of a better word) for Mac. The way you present it and the way your MacGyver deals with it only adds to his character. I recall the show writers touch on this possibility briefly in the episode The Negotiator but you took it much further and very successfully.
I like the way you wrote Sam too - he only had one episode in but I think you picked up well on his character traits. I wonder a bit about his illness and it's necessity - I got a feeling that you wanted to create a subplot but chose not to.
It would be great if you continued these series. I admire the ingenuity of Mac's solutions to his problems and his ways to circumwent his limitations and would love to see more of it.
Thank you for sharing your stories,

Cher.
Kasman
2006-02-21 . chapter 8
This is a good story. Very enjoyable.
Darediva
2006-02-20 . chapter 6
Really do like your MacGyver storyline, but you have a minor oops in your story.

"Remembering how the keypad was laid out on a rotary phone took a lot of thinking, plus two tries to get it right."

It's not a keypad. It's called a dial. Keypads came out with touchtone phones, and did not operate if you only had rotary (pulse) service. I'm just old enough to remember the difference.
fanfiction fanatic
2005-12-04 . chapter 8
Wow this was great but like some one else said it didn't seem done...like you could keep going...just like the show...and you know what that means...you should write a sequel type thing...and about sam's illness, does he have cancer or something similar because you never actually said what it was and i am curious.
Sakura123
2005-05-07 . chapter 8
This was a really cool story. It felt or read like something out of a MacGyver Episode or at least what a MacGyver episode would've been (see what I mean, it has been off for some years now) like.

I loved the plot and storyline for your fancition, the characterization for Mac and his son Sam among other characters (who weren't orignals) were creepily accurate to me, Witty comments included. Nice one.

Sakura123~
zeilfanaat
2004-11-11 . chapter 8
Sorry i haven't reviewed in a while. I've been so busy!! Anyway, I'm still reading it! Still enjoying it! So you'd better update soon!! Please? :)
jd burns
2004-11-09 . chapter 7
I'm reading this backwards, but sounds like you're not finished with this fic yet. :D

Just out of idle curiousity, is there a prequel to this story?
Sarai
2004-11-09 . chapter 7
Love it, especially the last chapter. I can agree with Mac's perceptions.
Sarai
2004-09-23 . chapter 6
I like it, but you kind of threw Sam's illness in there suddenly. It really doesn't seem to be a part of the plot.
Sarai
2004-09-18 . chapter 5
You updated, finally! I like it, but FYI, the majority of pepole in Gibraltar speak English since its a British colany. Of course there are a lot of Spanish people who come work ther b/c its on the border with Spain. Its a neat place.
Golden Phoenix
2004-09-16 . chapter 5
Gah! Too slow. *Jumps Up And Down On Author* Come on! :D
Anyways, as you have probably gathered, I like this fanfic Very much! You write so convincingly, as if you have personal experience with it...
Love it, keep it up, update soon! ;)
Sarai
2004-08-19 . chapter 4
Loving it. I want one of those computers. I could think of several things Mac can use to solve his technology problems. E-mail me and I'll give you info.
Golden Phoenix
2004-08-18 . chapter 4
This has got ot be one of the best MacGyver fanfics i've read in ages.
I love your version of the characters, it's very true to the TV series, it's just like Mac to not let something like losing his sight stop him.
I can't wait for you to update. please, for goodness sake do so soon!
Sarai
2004-07-20 . chapter 2
I am enjoying this, love the touch of humer. LOL
Sarai
2004-07-11 . chapter 1
I enjoy your stories. I especially like seeing blind people in strong roles, especially since I'm blind too. Hmm, using a folding cane as a fishing pole. Have to try that, especially since I have my guide dog, my cane is gathering dust. Though it does make retreaving things that fall behind dressers much easier. LOL
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