Awesome story! I really enjoyed it! it was great!

=)

Oh. My. God. BEST THING I'VE EVER READ!

kool

This was a frcken awesome story! I loved it!

when will you get working on that sequel you promised over two years ago?

sorry, but I kinda lost yah there ^^; ... I just read it and I could just think, ash saying: "... WHAT THE F**K IS GOING ON?!?!?!?"
Who is who!? all I heard is someone did something and something about ash having family and a dad and something confusing about time! its making my head spin! :0

sorry, but I'm a little sad. :(
I'm on the 15 chapter! and there is still know plot! just training, misty, more training, hoping to god that something different happens, more training and repeat!!

I have read 6 chapters and I'm on the first of the 7th and I and wondering when the plot will unfold. I love the story but, I and hoping that there is a bigger plot. I would still be good if it didn't, but it could be a lot better if it did have one! ;D

I hope brock comes back! :D (if he hasn't... I'm on chapter 5)

is this finished? nevermind, it is. well it needs a sequel. 10/10

I thought that this story was very well written and if there is going to be a sequel I am looking forward to it with great anticipation. Well Done!! :)

ch 10 missing

Chapter two missing

I TOLD you I would review when I was done. It just took me a while. Anyways, it's a great story, a bit slow for me though, and that whole time travelling thing was maddening. Seriously, I can't stop my brain from thinking about that whole "Paradox issue" for more than 15 minutes. But aside from that, it was one of the best I've read, anywhere.