That was so good..but one thing to correct..did you notcie what your chapters say..i do belive chapter 8 comes after chapter7..and it's not chapter9 comes after chapter7...:PLOL:P.but really don't worry about the chapter numbers cause that story was your aesome...
Great Job

~*~Flirtatious~*~

AAH UPDATE!

aw..yay! and for once...yuki seemed nice in a K/N story..lol jk...K/N 4ever!

i am seriously getting close to going to your house, duct taping your legs to the chair, and forcing you to write a chapter that is ACTUALLY A WHOLE PAGE!
the thought must make you shudder. actually giving your reviewers a whole freakin page!
haha. get my piont? :)

kewl

I like that song, you applied it to the story really well.

I just realized after I sent the other review in that I didn't review this chapter. This one was good. It was longer than the one that comes after it. Update soon with chapter 12 or 10 or whatever it is now. The numbers don't match the chapter titles.

-Krissy-

Great chapter! I must say though very short, short, short! I do love short chapters when I am behind but I love good old long ones when I'm not. Now we can get onto the good stuff next chapter right? Update soon.

-Krissy-

hey i am s sorry i didn't reply to your email...i just didn't have any ideas...sorry:s oh and i am so happy you updating again! and yay george is here! loved the chapters and neal's ok right? no hurt nothing RIGHT?

Short, but not sucky. Well, the shortness has a sort of inherent suckiness, but there isn't anything adding to it. All in all, it's a very good story. Take your time if you need to. Keep writing!

Nice move, adding in George!

-- jessalae

Another good chapter. A bit of OOCness from Jon- and does he really have authority to send Third Company with Kel? It matters not. I'm just a stickler.

-- jessalae

Very nice. You've got good control of the angst, interspersing it with humor– plenty of authors let it run rampant, trampling everything else. I like.

-- jessalae

Good! no, it wasn't really a cliffie. I guess I'm a bad judge, though, since I already have the next chapter!

-- jessalae

Very good! My compliments on such a clever way to get rid of Yuki! : )

-- jessalae