O I love this! You have so cleverly woven in and out 'this Ranger called Strider.' I also liked the way you talked about him smiling roguishly and knowing his mind is much higher. I love this! The best Strider poem I've seen so far!

Banshee Queen.

the first of these- it was okay, had a few meter problems.

The second-worse than the first-but you know already i'm not a Lego-luster either...but the following line was pretty funny.

But the THIRD...Mind numbing genius, my sister...absolute genius. I love the third.