 ashleyrocks3000 2009-11-08 . chapter 4 HI Im reviewing and I think your storys great! |
 Chibi angelle 2008-06-28 . chapter 4I think this is a good story.
You shouldn't write your stories so that other people can comment on it. You should write your stories because you enjoy writing. (And because you are, in fact, a good writer and should practice as often as possible.) |
 fallenphoenix1509 2007-09-15 . chapter 5thank you. this was so beautiful. i loved it. |
 rndmprsnlily 2007-04-28 . chapter 5 lol i kno its been a while since u finised writing this, but i wanted to review anyway. Learned about this fic thanx to Prose :). She's rite u know, this story should totally get more reviews :D. |
 Miss Eliza Azraelian 2007-02-20 . chapter 5*giggles* Woots! Yay! Thanks! I like... er... sorry... caffiene... not thinking... yeh... *takes a moment*. It's sad, depressing and cute!
~ miss ~ |
 reicheruchan 2007-01-06 . chapter 5quite sad ... nice~ |
 lukomouse 2006-01-15 . chapter 5YOU have a HERRT?! O.O! joking...don't kill me. You know you could have left out the last chapter and made it HAPPY...but that wouldn't be like you, no. This is good. AND THERE WAS LIGHT |
 lukomouse 2006-01-15 . chapter 4Damnit...I ALMOST expected a happy ending. What is WRONG with me?! This is my sister I'm talking about...You would never do that, of course not. No...Damn the mouse and bug to hell...;_; |
 lukomouse 2006-01-15 . chapter 3crazy...so CRAZY! And I LIVE with this crazy...how DO I do it?! I must be god. Bravo on your insanity. /go |
 lukomouse 2006-01-15 . chapter 2...Anyone who thinks they want to live with this crazy author...don't. She's...crazy? Is this why you take so long doing shit? O.o...er. Awsome though...I'll live if you don't bite me agian. /no1 |
 lukomouse 2006-01-15 . chapter 1I should have expected this from my own sister -stop looking over my shoulder-, you're so damn crazy...I admit that you definately have the writing talent in this house though. |
 DevilCricket 2005-06-23 . chapter 3First of all, I know squirrels chirp, but I guess I've never really thought about a chirping squirrel before. Thank you. That brightened up my entire day.. (how sad is that?)
Secondly- Throughout the story, both Draco and Harry's thoughts get off track and start to ramble. Although I realize that this is probably what you're trying to get across, it can be slightly confusing and hard to follow. Maybe it's just me that's having problems... If so, I'm sorry. And dont get me wrong. I like the addition of their thoughts-- it adds a new perspective to the story. I'm just saying that it's kind of messy.
Umm.. Yeah. I dont normally review, but this story is review-worthy and I thought I'd give it a try. Keep writing! |
 Prose 2005-04-17 . chapter 5in my opinion (and let me tell you, it COUNTS, DAMNIT! at least, as far as I'M concerned...), this story should have more reviews. people should pay more attention to it. if you want, i can demand that people read it in the author's note of the next story i write, because, seriously, this deserves more attention (er... i liked it, by the way. and now i have "Memory" stuck in my head. This is a pleasant alternative to the song that was playing in there prior to reading this, however, so, yet more points to you and this story! |
 Lucky Dragon Smile 2005-01-01 . chapter 4Cool story! Happy New Year!! This is really cool fic! |
 doxie 2005-01-01 . chapter 4right. and they had to be idiots? |