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ashleyrocks3000
2009-11-08 . chapter 4
HI Im reviewing and I think your storys great!
Chibi angelle
2008-06-28 . chapter 4
I think this is a good story.

You shouldn't write your stories so that other people can comment on it. You should write your stories because you enjoy writing. (And because you are, in fact, a good writer and should practice as often as possible.)
fallenphoenix1509
2007-09-15 . chapter 5
thank you. this was so beautiful. i loved it.
rndmprsnlily
2007-04-28 . chapter 5
lol i kno its been a while since u finised writing this, but i wanted to review anyway. Learned about this fic thanx to Prose :). She's rite u know, this story should totally get more reviews :D.
Miss Eliza Azraelian
2007-02-20 . chapter 5
*giggles* Woots! Yay! Thanks! I like... er... sorry... caffiene... not thinking... yeh... *takes a moment*. It's sad, depressing and cute!

~ miss ~
reicheruchan
2007-01-06 . chapter 5
quite sad ... nice~
lukomouse
2006-01-15 . chapter 5
YOU have a HERRT?! O.O! joking...don't kill me. You know you could have left out the last chapter and made it HAPPY...but that wouldn't be like you, no. This is good. AND THERE WAS LIGHT
lukomouse
2006-01-15 . chapter 4
Damnit...I ALMOST expected a happy ending. What is WRONG with me?! This is my sister I'm talking about...You would never do that, of course not. No...Damn the mouse and bug to hell...;_;
lukomouse
2006-01-15 . chapter 3
crazy...so CRAZY! And I LIVE with this crazy...how DO I do it?! I must be god. Bravo on your insanity. /go
lukomouse
2006-01-15 . chapter 2
...Anyone who thinks they want to live with this crazy author...don't. She's...crazy? Is this why you take so long doing shit? O.o...er. Awsome though...I'll live if you don't bite me agian. /no1
lukomouse
2006-01-15 . chapter 1
I should have expected this from my own sister -stop looking over my shoulder-, you're so damn crazy...I admit that you definately have the writing talent in this house though.
DevilCricket
2005-06-23 . chapter 3
First of all, I know squirrels chirp, but I guess I've never really thought about a chirping squirrel before. Thank you. That brightened up my entire day.. (how sad is that?)

Secondly- Throughout the story, both Draco and Harry's thoughts get off track and start to ramble. Although I realize that this is probably what you're trying to get across, it can be slightly confusing and hard to follow. Maybe it's just me that's having problems... If so, I'm sorry. And dont get me wrong. I like the addition of their thoughts-- it adds a new perspective to the story. I'm just saying that it's kind of messy.

Umm.. Yeah. I dont normally review, but this story is review-worthy and I thought I'd give it a try. Keep writing!
Prose
2005-04-17 . chapter 5
in my opinion (and let me tell you, it COUNTS, DAMNIT! at least, as far as I'M concerned...), this story should have more reviews. people should pay more attention to it. if you want, i can demand that people read it in the author's note of the next story i write, because, seriously, this deserves more attention (er... i liked it, by the way. and now i have "Memory" stuck in my head. This is a pleasant alternative to the song that was playing in there prior to reading this, however, so, yet more points to you and this story!
Lucky Dragon Smile
2005-01-01 . chapter 4
Cool story! Happy New Year!! This is really cool fic!
doxie
2005-01-01 . chapter 4
right. and they had to be idiots?
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