I agree with the other review. Stick with the first ending and include a colon after the character's name. It makes for reading the dialogue much easier. Also, Kramer's never seen friend is Bob Sacamano. Good Seinfeld concept.

Good call on Jerry's fear of germs and the characters interactions with each other.

I think I liked the first ending slightly better, although, I don't think Elaine would tell Jerry to shut up; I think she'd glare at him *very* strongly instead with Jerry backing off with a sort of 'okay, okay, calm down, I was only joking' series of body movments after.

A couple of notes:

For easier reading, you should put a colon after the characters names (ie George: Hey Jerry what's up?) if you did in the original document, then for some reason it's being edited out when uploaded.

I'm pretty sure it's Bob Sacamento, not Bob Sacamente.