umm...WOW! That was one of the most amazing stories I have ever read! 15 years old? Yeah right! Wow keep it up, seriously, I'll be reading your novels one day )

you know the funny thing is I'm actually in the prossess of writting a fanfic similar to this xD But It's not as good... the first chapter I posted up a few months ago I think. It's called My Ultimate Creation or something like that lol I can't even remember xD

anyway great story I can't wait to read the sequal...

you know you're really good at this making me cry thing... -_-;

lol

thanks for making me cry dude... my mom thinks I'm nuts now... she's sitting here watching Pirates of the Carrabean and I'm sitting here crying xD

very good I love it. It's very well written.

I found your fanfic four years ago, and it struck such a chord with me. I was 14 at the time, and I fell in love with your story. I searched for weeks after it was deleted from its original source in a desperate attempt to find it - and, coming across it again now, really brings back wonderful memories of anticipating the next part of the story, curling up with my laptop. You are truly a talented writer, and you greatly inspired me to continue my dream of becoming an author. I hope you haven't lost your passion for writing, because you are simply brilliant - thank you for a wonderful story.

Alex

I had to review despite the length of time that has passed. It was a good story. Very poetic. But it almost seems as if you are beating a dead horse. I would have seen it as a more plausible conclusion if he had died a long time ago. Overall, though, a good read.

Cytavani

That was the best and most depressing story i ever read. You've got talent. I just like stuff being SLIGHTLY happy. The nice ending also didn't fit the severly sad story

0.0

Its too good! The best Rocket fic I've ever read!

Favorites list!

what i've read so far is good!

I wish I liked romance; I find this stuff sappy and all "Eww, cooties"-ish...erm, ahem. ANYWAY. I really like the way you set your imagery; it creates nearly a perfect picture in my mind everytime I keep reading it.

I only wish that you could have started a new paragraph when somebody else was speaking, because I got myself lost from time to time. XP I'll read Chapter 3 when I get another opportunity.

Well, as I promised, I finally read it! Well, the first chapter anyway. And far unlike the show itself, Team Rocket actually has some depth to their character! Instead of the shallow, bumbling baffoons we're all used to seeing, there's an awful lot of intellectual stuff going on here!

My only beef is that it's a bit angsty, but then again I bet that's the type of thing you were aiming for when you wrote this anyway, right? Not that there's anything wrong with it; as a matter of fact, I don't mind a bit of angst. Stories that are dark and somewhat twisted are really intruiging to me. Why they are, I'll never know, but I'll continue to read!

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The perfect song for this fic:

Evanescence-Even In Death

*applause* great work!

Wow. This is the most beautiful fic I have ever read. I actually *cried* when reading chapters 7 and 8! i can't wait to move on to the sequel! keep up the wonderful work!

Whoa. Don't wanna make this long, but...damn. That was great.