Wow, I just read this, and this is truly great. It's so simple and yet so complex, I love that. And very touching, too, or maybe rather moving. Sums up tons of feelings and emotions.


Tinnie

that was amazing. I can't believe I haven't read this before. Anyway i'm reading it now and it is amazing. Very strong images wonderful!

Oh my god... this is so gorgeous. You have such astonishing power over these characters, more than I myself could ever hope to have. Your selection of detail is rich and tantalizing, your imagery magnificent. I have to put this on my favorites list. You are so vedy, vedy talented. Never stop writing!

WONDERFUL!

Yet another excellent work from an excellent author!

Wow. I really love your style of writing.

This is lovely poetry. I think the better you can manage poetry the better writer it makes you because you learn to say a lot with a very little.

Very, very good.

Very nice. I really like this- it seems a bit deeper and more emotional than some of the other things you've written from Sands' pov, especially towards the end. I loved the line: "Music has a taste, he knows this now. Every note is unique. Some melt on his tongue. Others are sharp and bitter and make him wince." One of the amazing things about your writing is how you take things from such a unique perspective, like in phrases such as the one above. Beautiful work!

Oh, that was nice. Really moody, and emotional, with a modicum of words. I like that alot. Nicely done! I am now off to see what other wonders you've created.

YAY!! You wrote another OUaTiM fic! This is really cool, it's a different style from your others. I really liked it! ^_^ Very nice. Thanks for always providing a good read

You know what I thought as soon as I read that last line,
'He never knew before how cold he was, he thinks, until he came to Mexico.'?
It was 'Good thing he did not go to Alaska then!'.

:P

Beside that: This is really good, I did like it alot. When are you going to start writeing more fics? I can't wait!

Myth.

Hmm. I liked it. It was different from your other stories, but i liked it just the same. Your way of describing things is unique. I always love reading what you write. I hope you post more soon. :D

I really like this little piece. I like the first part the best. I think you did a good job kind of getting into the mind of the character. keep up the good work!

That was beautiful, you are so in touch with this movie!

You're too good for ff.net. If you posted this on w.livejournal.com/communities/agentsands, they'd love you forever. (Someone recced it there; that's how I read this in the first place.)

Loved: The darkness laughs back, and when it does it bares its teeth, and those teeth can draw blood.