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| CosmicEssence 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseThis just feels perfect in regards to the setup you've given it. Kind of sweet too and i deffo liked Severus' pov. |
| Shiva'sGirl 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abusecute, very cute |
| Beauty In The Making 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseUmm.. no i'm not tring to be rude but Ginny's name is not Virginia. I can't remember what it is but i know Virginia it is not. |
| Double Spell 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuse*~Even without Occlumency, he could usually tell what someone was thinking by looking in their eyes~* -"Occulency" is the ability to -block out- an invasion of the mind. "-Legilimency-" is the ability to invade another mind. |
| Chrisy Agitado 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseHy I'm not sure if you are still interested in reviews, bu here is one anyway :-) I like how SS feeling seem to develop. at the beginning he seemed really **. and then he is in love with ginny. the "viriginia weasley" part was a bit ** me. I had to look twice to see it was Ginny. Maybe you want to rephrase your summary. it's a bit sad for story to know what sev is talking about (that he is aktuall missing Harry). All in all: really great writting style |
| Haunt of twilight 2005-09-06 ch 1, | abuseawe how sweet. that was interesting |
| Black Perla 2005-07-11 ch 1, | abusevery nice story. |
| hipa 2004-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice and so CUTE! and also so romantic. I like. |
| Lee~ 2004-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, nice ending. I love how Severus thinks. *smirk* thanks for this is was well done. :) |
| SerpentSlaveChik 2004-07-09 ch 1, | abuseSo cute!! And I'll keep my eye out for when you write their Order days. ^_^ |
| barbarataku 2004-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abusePERFECT! |
| barbarataku 2004-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abusePERFECT! |
| Rain 2004-07-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww... Shame on you Severus Snape! This is hilarious. I mean, the way you potray Snape's feeling is just great. |
| Ivory Heart 2004-07-08 ch 1, | abuseHow cute! Thought Sev would scowl and glares cause He doesn't do cute .:snorts:. Ginny can be very annoying, eh? |
| Saavik13 2004-07-08 ch 1, | abusevery good job with severus' inseceruties. |