That was sad. x.x So horribly sad

A truly gorgeous piece of writing. I just had the chance to read it now, and may I say I adore the way you explored Faye's emotions. The insights you've made into the darkness of these characters is incredible. My favourite part?
"How did he die?"
"Alone."
Brilliant. :)

This is also a nice one-shot. I like it a lot!

Wow, you really got me on this one! I like how the song comes in the towards the end, it really heightens the intensity of what's going on. Also the way Faye describes her memories and comparing them to Spike's experience, and then really the story itself is a recalling of memories from the actual show; that had an effect on me as a reader, as someone who also had memories of watching the show. Does that make sense? It kind of made me identify with Faye's thoughts a lot more.

“How did he die?

ok...I literally cried. Through like, the whole thing. I never cry while reading stories. Wow. Just. Wow. *slaps self* What I'm trying to say, incoherently and very badly, is that it was amazing.

Wow, this story really drew me into. You portrayed Faye's emotions and thoughts and feelings about Spike, while still keeping her in character. The song lyrics I'm less fond of, but then I don't like them in stories in general. I liked how you blended some of Spike's thoughts into the story in such a way that it added to the main focus of the story (Faye. The story itself was very moving and effective at taking a closer look at Faye from the inside out. Great job