Hmm, dark, yes, quite good poem. Could have been a bit longer.

Dark. Do you do any light themes? I would be very interested in reading a visual image projecting joy, hope, pleasure, charity, kindness, accomplishment, or personal character.

Can that be done?

umm yeah i dont get it lol sry danni!

yay! good! reminds me of...the end of the world, or the battle fields of iraq! V descrtptive! BRAVO! ENCORE!

cool! i like it! keep it up! _

ew.. i don't like zombies. I LIKE EDWARD SCISSORHANDS!

Bakura- Yeah! Me too! ...I wonder if he'd trade hands with me?

-... I wouldn't let him.

Bakura- Aw...

- - very nice.. er.. i mean... awesome! yeah.. horror/angst doesn't seem "nice". yeah, anyways i did the second chapter on my story on fiction press, just so you know. - ok, bye!