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openwindow
2008-07-22
ch 10,
abusecute. it's very original. :)
yared
2007-06-17
ch 10,
abuseGreat story, LeFou is so cute, and IC :)
Melanthios
2006-11-16
ch 10,
abuse*applause*

I...I really don't have anything else to say. This was grand.
I dunno
2006-04-23
ch 10, anon.
abuseGood story, well written. Is it done? I can't remember if it said 'Completed' on it...

If it isn't, I don't really know where it's going, everyone seems married and happy. It's already wraped up ^^
Nota Lone
2006-03-31
ch 10,
abuse-hand over heart-

I love this story MADLY. ^^ I'm not sure if I can even find constructive critisism...
TaB
2006-03-20
ch 10, anon.
abuseA little bit of country? Danvers had a more than passing resemblance to an old fashioned Western town.

Seriously though, you have a knack of describing people without needing to elaborate, which is really good.

Everyone seems to have got an even handed treatment,and it's nice to have happy endings for the "villains" and "sidekicks".Hopefully Disney will pick up the hint and start making well rounded stories like these soon.
mindlessmadness
2006-02-27
ch 10,
abuseI realize that this review is terribly terribly late, but this is an excellent story. I always had doubts about whether or not Gaston would die, and i like the way you handled it. I also love your characterization of LeFou. And i have to say, i almost fell on the floor laughing at "Prince Furball". Hehehe.
Anarea Rose
2005-08-02
ch 10,
abuseA wonderful story. You often forget about the lesser characters in the story. YOu did a good job of telling what might have happened. I enjoyed it very much. Write more like it!!
Hedlund
2005-07-14
ch 10,
abuseA story about Lefou! You really made my day with this one. The fact that you even made me see something good in Gaston, of all people, is pretty awe-inspiring. Your portrait of Lefou is what's most remarcable though - he's still recognizable from the movie canon, and much more three dimensional. :)
Tar Irene
2005-05-09
ch 1,
abuseI am a huge nerd, but I've just re-read this story and had to review again - it is definitely the best B&B fic I've read (and I've read most of them on this site). Very very very good job, Prince Furball remains the funniest nick for the Beast, ever.
Tar Irene
2004-12-12
ch 10,
abuseOh, wow. I positively *love* this story. It's nothing less than wonderful. You make LeFou such a sympathetic character, I love how you put us into his head and make him real. I also adore that you let Gaston live - I think killing him off in the movie was a bit unnecessary. And I just love your portrayal of the Prince and his household and his style of rule.. of course everything's not perfect in the end, Belle and her Prince are still going to have issues. And you really did well with Gaston's character - really. He is still the awfully arrogant brat we knew in the film, but he's become a lot more, and he's better for it. I just.. gosh, I love everything about this story. It's really funny, charming, sweet, engaging, fascinating, beautiful. The scenes between Gaston and Christophe, Gaston and Belle - I just love the way you scripted them. Ah.. it's just all really, really good.
TallieCat
2004-11-18
ch 10,
abuseThis was such a satisfying story! You took the time to develop the characters, who turned out fantastically satisfying. I really do hope you plan on a sequel--I'd like to know more about Emeline, and see more interaction between the characters--they're too real to want to see laid down for good! Even if you don't, however, this is a great story, and I will probably read it several more times in the future!
TrudiRose
2004-11-06
ch 10,
abuseOf course I reviewed this back in the day (and how unfair that you had to take all the stories off and put them back without your reviews!) But I just have to say again what a FANTASTIC story this is! You did such a wonderful job of making LeFou a real, believable, three-dimensional character. The whole story flows so well, and the ending was very satisfying. (And of course you know I adored the whole section with Gaston!) And I'm still holding you to your promise to write the bear story and the Danvers story!
FallenStar
2004-10-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm not one to cringe at criticising something if I seriously think something is wrong with it. And often I have a pretty good idea of what is good or bad. That said, I LOVED this story! It's written in such an easy-to-read way, and the characterization, descriptions, everything was awesome! Thanks for the story.
Reluctantdragon
2004-10-09
ch 10, anon.
abuse!

VERY WELL DONE!

its very hard to find a well written post BatB fic, and you have succeded!

i love it!

(cant wait for the next chap!)
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