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robbeeleebabe16@gmail.com
2008-12-12 . chapter 4
love it
wannabeawriter
2007-04-29 . chapter 4
wats wd the new chick?r u going to repeat the same story all over again?wer did paul go?
Susie Madison
2005-11-05 . chapter 4
Hey,
this story is very go but you haven't updated for like a million years no please don't tell me that you have given up but do tell me that you are going to update very soon please I love it and can't wait to see what is going to happen next and is this a p/s or a j/s please have it a p/s cause they are the best
luv Suze
Querida1607
2005-05-31 . chapter 1
UPDATE PLEASE!i am beggin u on my knees PLEASE
Querida1607
2005-05-22 . chapter 4
update soon please i love this story, especially the fluff..UPDATE PLEASE
nikki
2005-01-19 . chapter 4
Yeah, is suze going to give the necklace to jack so he can bring rose back to life?
nikki
2005-01-18 . chapter 4
LOVE IT!
Lollasaurus Rex
2005-01-03 . chapter 4
“So,” Paul said, looking at me, “you actually chose a ghost, someone who was dead, over my brother. A living person?” I felt Jesse go a little tense, and I glared at Jack.

You did it again. Jack, not Paul.

Hehehe.

Again, a very good chapter.

O. Paulie's AWAKE and WALKKING.

Yay.

PLEASE UPDATE, YOU MISERABLE YET TALENTeD WORM

Hehehe. Just kidding. You're not a worm. You're a wasp.

Bzz...

Hehehe. JEsse is so sweet.

WHO'S THIS ROSE, HUH?

I ASKED YOU A QUESTION.

...PUNK.

Love Lolly, the schizophrenic one.
Lollasaurus Rex
2004-12-29 . chapter 3
Ah, joyjoyjoy.

Tis joyous.

I'm joful.

Full of joy.

FINALLY YOU UPDATED.

Fool.

Well, yeah. I'll point it out in the review too: “I think I might of.” Paul said thinking about it a bit more. “Yeah, right when I said it I noticed his hands clench. He has it in for you, doesn’t he Jesse?”

Should be PAUL.

Meh.

It's a great story.

Tis.

I'm so thrilled that I know what's going to happen.

HEHEHE. Paul clenched his fists. Init cute? INIT??

:D

Love it. KEEP WRITING. And sorry that Flashlight chappies are so long. Me and Hayley just can't shut up I guess.

Love Lolly.
Hypatia Cade
2004-08-25 . chapter 2
If it was true that I was nice, It would be true that your story sucked. Good thing for you i'm evil muh ha ha ha ha. Great story! Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read next chapter.
TakeIt2TheStArs
2004-08-21 . chapter 2
UPDATE PLEASE!
bloodsoakedtiger
2004-07-23 . chapter 2
omg this is great i just read the necklace too! keep up the good work and update soon plz!!
Kry
gatorchick007
2004-07-19 . chapter 2
omfg no damnit y i think u should kill paul make him get hit by a train lol -jess
UnangelicHalo
2004-07-18 . chapter 2
Aw. How cute! Extremely!
Update soon!
Kat.
Phylicia
2004-07-15 . chapter 2
I like it. i can't wait to see were it will end up. Please update soon
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