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| Doug4422 2007-05-17 ch 1,  | abuseThis one is definitely got several mixed feelings in it . . . there's fear, relief, and finally, LOL comedy. Good job on an old favorite. Doug. |
| El Gringo Loco 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseWell written with great attention to detail. The characters are true to the series and the emotions are well done. Readers can easily can easily relate to or even place themselves in the scene. Based on this story, it should be worth checking out the authors other work. |
| louise 2006-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abusehi ,i first read your fic afew weeks ago and it made me want to see this eps.i kept my eye out and saw it the other night.now ive reread your fic and wanetd to elt you know you did afaboulous job of recreating red and malloy a nd their friendship. its so nice to get the extra scenes the show didnt give us. thanks louise |
| Meercat 2004-08-15 ch 1, | abuseYes! Another wonderful A-12 story! I could easily see this one carrying on from the canon episode, filling in all the angst I wished for in the original! True characterization, flowing storyline, and realistic dialogue. Bravo, well done. More please? :) |
| KatKnits00 2004-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnother great story. I hadn't realized that this ep happened after Jimmy's birth. Tell's you how long it's been since I've seen our guys. |
| Tammy 2004-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnother wonderful story. I like angst and you sure put Jim through it well. Jean was done very well and of course so was Wells. There's a lot more to him than meets the eye, I think. |