I thought it was really great. You captured Scot's personality exactly and of course Storms. I would have loved more romance to be between them... since I just watched X-Men again last night and thought hey, what a cute couple, but still it was perfect.
I love how you write!

Great story, I really liked it :)

Oh, a Scott/Ororo, and very well-written too--except it's not done! *g* We still need to see where Scott makes it up to her somehow . . .

Have my children, please!

You are a brilliant writer and you kept both of them in character and that just makes me all fuzzy inside. I would like to officially name you my hero for writing this ship.

one of my fave pairs in Marvel, and nicely done what more can I say?
cant say that there somthing I didnt like or such.
so keep up the good work dear.

Honestly, can you right a bad story...I don't think so. :) I started reading your stories at the Storm_n_Wolverine group, and you have quickly become one of my favorite authors. Keep up the amazing work!!

Good story. The emotions were subtle but intense. I enjoyed the Scott/Ororo moment.

Nice story

Aww, this was so sad -huggles Storm plushies- Please...right more? -puppy-dog eyes- Please? I love Scott/Ororo pairings. I thrive on them -pokes eyeball- Write more.

Wow, that was wonderful. Keep writing.

Wow, that was good, continue soon.

I am a fan of Scott/Ororo pairing.

Hello its me again. My name is spelled with just one N not a double like before I messed up. Anyway I just wanted to say again that you are a very excellent writer I love the way how you made Scott think. Its so sad how he forgot Ororo's birthday. He would celebrate her birthday every year until Jeans death but its cool how he is going to make it up to her in the end. Your story is my top 5 favorite stories. I really hope you can do another make sure it has Storm in it. She is my favorite character. fantastic, fantastic, fantastic story. Do another!

I love this story. Its so sad but good in the end. I read this fic two times thats how much I love it.Thanks for sharing it with me and everyone else. I enjoyed it.

I liked this story, angsty with a hopeful ending. I hope Scott makes it up to her.

This was so moving. I love it. Thanks for writing it.