Evil Cloyster

You must really hate Misty!

So, it ends here? a bit unexpected, but still, a good ending. Nice reference to Serebii at the end. Great Read overall.

More new pokemon? cool. Raptors are awesome. Jack got beaten by Ash yet again, what is he Ash's personal punching bag?

Nice battle. Ash sure kicked Misty and Jack's butt hard... Again. good chapter.

Wow. So AJ appears to. I love references to obscure anime characters. good chapter, and good battle.

again nice work. Ash doesnt take well to romance does he? Poor Misty. Though that's an interesting way to get a badge.

Nice work. I laughed at the part when Ash freaked out about the female rocket member "stripping". Also the part with the magikarp was funny.

A new pokemon? cool. I like Dinosaurs, so the new pokemon sounds nice. Good chapter.

As usual good job on the battle scenes. I wonder where Catelyn got those cookies from. That was random, yet cute.

Another addition to Ash's team. Ditto is interesting. I like Kabuto's cocky attitude.

cool. The reference to Brocks family is nice. And the acknowledgment of TMs is always nice _.

Hm... Getting more interesting. Ash getting a Kabuto is nice. and a tournament where the winner gets the losers pokemon? sounds intriguing.

Cute story. Nice to see what would have happened if someone else had fished him out of the river. One thing im confused about though, is Catelyn Lance as a girl or is Catelyn Lance pretending to be a girl? I'm puzzled a little. Hope the rest is good too.

...interesting